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Nightmare

I wake up crying alone in the dark; The thoughts of the dream made me scream; I seek out your hand but its not there, nor are you; I take ahold the bear and hug it tight. I hold it,rocking myself, that dream was to real; How we used to be, oh so happy; In your arms, I was so safe; Your kiss made my heart leap. I miss you cant you see? Our love was strong; She came along and broke it; Now we are done.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/24/2009 5:49:00 AM
write more ho...ho....ho...haha. i loves you. and das is gute! you know it is. ps this class sucks. i see you haha. walking back to your friggin desk.
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Date: 11/19/2009 1:10:00 PM
sad, reminds me of the song She's Come Undone? Light & Love
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Date: 11/9/2009 9:09:00 AM
wtf...i hate justice....no i dont.....='( i hate boys....i dont under stand them at all and i want my andres and noel...you called it earlier in class, imma bout to cry furrsuree. xoxo love you turbo mi little sundance ;)...i already told you what i thought of your poem. xo Raiin
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Date: 11/6/2009 11:08:00 AM
I am sorry Brooke. I can feel your pain because I've been there! We all have been there and I will tell you-I've sure you've heard this before- 'This too shall pass'. Hold on and keep writing and sharing your work here at PS! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 11/5/2009 3:28:00 PM
Thanks guys
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Date: 11/5/2009 2:59:00 PM
Lost love a topic that is written about more than any other topic. It is sad and hurts when love goes bad. Welcome to soup. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 11/5/2009 2:57:00 PM
Sad poem Brooke, i do hope it gets better. A warm welcome to the Soup to you >> James
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