Nightmare

I wake up crying alone in the dark;
The thoughts of the dream made me scream;
I seek out your hand but its not there, nor are you;
I take ahold the bear and hug it tight.

I hold it,rocking myself, that dream was to real;
How we used to be, oh so happy;
In your arms, I was so safe;
Your kiss made my heart leap.

I miss you cant you see?
Our love was strong;
She came along and broke it;
Now we are done.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Loveless Avatar
November 24, 2009 at 5:49 AM
write more ho...ho....ho...haha. i loves you. and das is gute! you know it is. ps this class sucks. i see you haha. walking back to your friggin desk.
Guzzi Avatar
November 19, 2009 at 1:10 PM
sad, reminds me of the song She's Come Undone? Light & Love
Loveless Avatar
November 9, 2009 at 9:09 AM
wtf...i hate justice....no i dont.....='( i hate boys....i dont under stand them at all and i want my andres and noel...you called it earlier in class, imma bout to cry furrsuree. xoxo love you turbo mi little sundance ;)...i already told you what i thought of your poem. xo Raiin
Haick Avatar
November 6, 2009 at 11:08 AM
I am sorry Brooke. I can feel your pain because I've been there! We all have been there and I will tell you-I've sure you've heard this before- 'This too shall pass'. Hold on and keep writing and sharing your work here at PS! Peace and love, Audrey
Snyder Avatar
November 5, 2009 at 3:28 PM
Thanks guys
Kendrick Avatar
November 5, 2009 at 2:59 PM
Lost love a topic that is written about more than any other topic. It is sad and hurts when love goes bad. Welcome to soup. Keep writing. Sara
Fraser Avatar
November 5, 2009 at 2:57 PM
Sad poem Brooke, i do hope it gets better. A warm welcome to the Soup to you >> James
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