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Nightmare

I am walking alone in an unknown town The road is endless and the sand is dark-brown I can’t move backward Because some force is attracting me forward Why am I so powerless? Am I dreaming? All my clothes are wetted, because I am sweating Is it a nightmare or is it reality? I can’t decide I hear some laughter Coming from afar I am afraid I remain speechless Because my mouth is closed Though I am still walking, It seems like I am paralyzed I want to turn left or right But the road is straight It seems like the world is closed on me Who is going to rescue me? Who is going to deliver me? From that no man’s land where I get trapped

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/10/2009 6:39:00 PM
I liked this one, I think with a little tweaking this would blow people away.
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Date: 10/10/2009 12:50:00 PM
Some very stressful feeling here. Like we all have sometimes when we feel life is closing in on us. Keep writing. Sara
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