Nightlife

shaking fairyland forest
   gazillions of acorns sleet
       are the squirrels playing slots —
                         Vegas on my roof.

                                 9/27/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Romios Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 4:51 PM
Kim..I see you have no Soupmail? I had to remove your comment about dads, because it was on a duplicate PAge...the poem is still thefe...but your comment and mine are gone, You can readd it at The original poem about dads if you Choose. Sorry I did not add it twice, pS did.....having Massive hassles with the site right now very Sorry. Pangiexx
Romios Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 4:53 PM
On the followers page there is no soup,ail. OM this page THEre is I don't get it,
Krutsinger Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 11:03 AM
Ah, so pretty. Brilliantly done, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 1:29 PM
Oh it is a party upstairs, while we are trying to sleep! LOL. Thank you!
Fowler Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 10:24 AM
teehee Kim. Very cute! Linda
Rodrigues Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 1:29 PM
Thank you, Linda!
Buhagiar Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 1:32 AM
I understand that Vegas is some sort of game. ~~
Rodrigues Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 3:21 AM
Las Vegas is a gambling city in the U.S. When you walk through the hotels, you here the noisy game machines.
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