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Nightingale's Watch

Through somber steps each climb is made; The fruitless efforts fail. Thus, love unshared and work unpaid Disturbs the nightingale. In song it copes With fears and hopes; From limbs it hung, All feelings sung. Warm waters crawl beneath its wings On lonely twilight trips. Yet, cold of nighttime softly stings The feet with which he grips. So many are the shamed Whose sorry sights were aimed To win the hopeless fight; The one unanswered plight. Where care once came Comes only shame; Now only rhyme Recalls the time When lovers held each other tight On nights of endless laughter. The nightingale would take its flight, Rejoicing ever after. But friends refuse each others hands, The sign of cherished life. On edge of death his heart now stands. Serrated is the knife. Now gone away again to mourn The winged creature flies, Until the warmth of love reborn Revives the sunken eyes-- Those bitter sockets filled with tears Reflect the speckled moon. Escape from tortured life appears-- He ends the final tune.

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Date: 3/2/2010 11:26:00 AM
OMG. This is just Amazing. This is a piece of art. You are one of the most tallented people i know!!! I love your poetry!!!!: )
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Date: 3/2/2010 11:18:00 AM
wow mike you have a true talent here, the imagery is amazing and i am a sucker for imagery ask anyone i liked the last line of the 6 stanza i thought it waas very symbolic. great great write! Jo
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Date: 3/2/2010 11:17:00 AM
NICE!!! Love it. Very good
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Date: 3/2/2010 11:15:00 AM
absoultly beautiful. i have no words left to express what i think of this.
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Date: 3/1/2010 11:00:00 AM
Such talent! wonderful
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Date: 12/31/2009 1:04:00 PM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A well deserved honor.
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Date: 12/29/2009 7:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Mike. I wish you the best with your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/28/2009 3:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine poem being featured this week, Happy New Year >> James
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Date: 12/23/2009 10:56:00 AM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the PoetrySoup Site October Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Mike. May 2010 be the year you see your writing endeavors become reality. Love and blessings to you and yours always, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 9:48:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 11:25:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 10/23/2009 9:53:00 AM
A MASTERPIECE! I have put this on my favorite list. Thank you so much for sharing this magnificent poem, Mike. Lainie
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Date: 10/19/2009 10:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week >> James
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Date: 10/18/2009 5:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Mike. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/9/2009 5:17:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your awesome poetry today. Thank you Mike. I hope you have a wonderful weekend full of love, fun and inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/8/2009 8:32:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poem tonight...nice...Thanks Marty
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