Nightingale's Watch

Through somber steps each climb is made;
The fruitless efforts fail.
Thus, love unshared and work unpaid
Disturbs the nightingale.

In song it copes
With fears and hopes;
From limbs it hung,
All feelings sung.

Warm waters crawl beneath its wings
On lonely twilight trips.
Yet, cold of nighttime softly stings
The feet with which he grips.

So many are the shamed
Whose sorry sights were aimed
To win the hopeless fight;
The one unanswered plight.

Where care once came
Comes only shame;
Now only rhyme
Recalls the time

When lovers held each other tight
On nights of endless laughter.
The nightingale would take its flight,
Rejoicing ever after.

But friends refuse each others hands,
The sign of cherished life.
On edge of death his heart now stands.
Serrated is the knife.

Now gone away again to mourn
The winged creature flies,
Until the warmth of love reborn
Revives the sunken eyes--
Those bitter sockets filled with tears
Reflect the speckled moon.
Escape from tortured life appears--
He ends the final tune.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Rakis Avatar
March 2, 2010 at 11:26 AM
OMG. This is just Amazing. This is a piece of art. You are one of the most tallented people i know!!! I love your poetry!!!!: )
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March 2, 2010 at 11:18 AM
wow mike you have a true talent here, the imagery is amazing and i am a sucker for imagery ask anyone i liked the last line of the 6 stanza i thought it waas very symbolic. great great write! Jo
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March 2, 2010 at 11:17 AM
NICE!!! Love it. Very good
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March 2, 2010 at 11:15 AM
absoultly beautiful. i have no words left to express what i think of this.
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March 1, 2010 at 11:00 AM
Such talent! wonderful
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December 31, 2009 at 1:04 PM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A well deserved honor.
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December 29, 2009 at 7:48 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Mike. I wish you the best with your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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December 28, 2009 at 3:34 AM
Congratulations on your fine poem being featured this week, Happy New Year >> James
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December 23, 2009 at 10:56 AM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the PoetrySoup Site October Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Mike. May 2010 be the year you see your writing endeavors become reality. Love and blessings to you and yours always, Carol
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December 21, 2009 at 9:48 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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December 20, 2009 at 11:25 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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October 23, 2009 at 9:53 AM
A MASTERPIECE! I have put this on my favorite list. Thank you so much for sharing this magnificent poem, Mike. Lainie
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October 19, 2009 at 10:32 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week >> James
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October 18, 2009 at 5:08 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Mike. Love, Carol
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October 9, 2009 at 5:17 PM
I enjoyed reading your awesome poetry today. Thank you Mike. I hope you have a wonderful weekend full of love, fun and inspiration. Love, Carol
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October 8, 2009 at 8:32 PM
I enjoyed reading your poem tonight...nice...Thanks Marty
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