Debra Squyres Poet Free verse

Nightfall Surrender

Nightfall Surrender

You became a part of me
as I join in and became
a part of you…
   rolling along with the waves
   you complete me
   as I complete you

Soul mates lost
in forgotten time…
   subliminally 
   physically
the ebb joins the flow
in luxurious tides
finding fulfilling delights

You alone fill 
my empty spaces,
   as the waves of the sea
   fill the voids in the sand,
permeating my being 
with extensiveness
as no other has before
or since

Tick, Tocks
the forgotten clock
lost in the bliss 
of the sensual night…
pulled under 
in wave after crashing wave…
   drowning quite happily
   in your arms…our crescendo!
   
Then comes the sighs 
of morning’s arrival…
as tears anew stain
your empty pillow…
   still somehow
   your memory
   completes me
   if only at nightfall
   when remembrances
   thrive in dreams pleasure  


All rights reserved by Debra Squyres @ 2013/2/19

Written for:  Cyndi MacMillan"s "My Spice Box"  members contest

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Len Gasun March 2, 2013 at 8:30 PM My hearty congratulations on your fantastic win my dear friend, Debra! A great write indeed! Thank you so much for sharing. love/hugs, Leonora

Poet Destroyer A March 1, 2013 at 8:05 PM Debra, :-) congratulations with your sweet and spicy win in Cyndi's out of the box" SENSUAL POETRY. ADULTS ONLY." Contest* Always & Forever ~LINDA

Debbie Guzzi March 1, 2013 at 6:26 PM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Robert Johnson February 20, 2013 at 3:09 PM A love filled heart that's so alone. Remembering a love that it'd once known. Requainted souls among the stars. Await return of Venus and Mars.

Jack Jordan February 20, 2013 at 8:15 AM I see what you mean... Jack

Russell Sivey February 19, 2013 at 8:12 PM This is a simply brilliant and wondrous write my friend! I really loved reading this delightful poem this evening! What a tremendous piece, Great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen February 19, 2013 at 2:00 PM Debra, it's so lovely written!! - I LOVE IT!! - It would be one winning poem, I do not question it. - Congratulations already! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)