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Nightfall Awakens

A captured raven Ignites the dark within her Nightfall awakens Out there, light lives forever Will she survive or succumb

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/24/2010 5:11:00 AM
pure poetry...wow...another lovely write James...^_^ v
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Date: 7/17/2010 11:35:00 AM
Interesting write...Not sure exactly of the interpertation...Sara
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Date: 7/17/2010 6:45:00 AM
Great tanka, James, and I like your question at the end. Don't know much about ravens, only what I've read in Poe's poem. Wonder if they travel by daylight? Intriguing! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/17/2010 6:04:00 AM
I will have to try his form.. great write again my friend...Michael
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