Juliet Ligon Poet Rhyme

Nightfall

Her hush rolls like folding scrolls
Gentle breeze, whiffs of anise
Fire, cream puff desire
Soft sorbet, goosebump display
Draw back of kite, lull of light
Descending easel bending
Blackboard slate, forgiveness' weight


5-17-2020

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Eric Cohen June 3, 2020 at 10:24 PM Juliet, I enjoyed this. Clever internal rhyme and imagery.

Evelyn Judy Buehler May 28, 2020 at 10:57 PM Beautifully described images of the loveliness and peace of nightfall. Nicely done! :)

Connie Marcum Wong May 20, 2020 at 4:01 AM My favorite scent at night in summer is the night blooming jasmine. I enjoyed your seven senses of nightfall Juliet. xxoo Juliet Ligon May 20, 2020 at 8:30 PM Thanks, Connie. That sounds pleasant.

Jeanne Mcgee May 18, 2020 at 1:41 PM a very moving piece of writing. congratulations on your podium win. Juliet Ligon May 18, 2020 at 5:47 PM Thanks, Jeanne. I wrote this after the contest and went another direction with it. I enjoyed the idea prompts.