Laura Leiser Poet Free verse

Night Visions

Twilight graveyard, solemn shadows

                             Shadow's tombstones, lined in silence

                                Silence, broken by cries of grief

                                Grief for the departed, love lost.












Written on 6/6/2015

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Kp Nunez June 9, 2015 at 9:24 AM Ah, but this is beautiful! I need not see the visual to imagine the scene. Loved it Laura! Blessings for the contest! hugs! :-) Laura Leiser June 12, 2015 at 8:09 PM Thank you, Kim! I appreciate your kind words and stopping by :)

Viv Wigley June 8, 2015 at 12:41 AM Tricky to do a visual justice in four lines, but you've pulled it off. Well done, Laura, and good luck. Viv x Laura Leiser June 12, 2015 at 8:08 PM Thank you, Viv! Your kind words always encourage me :)

Mark Trichet June 7, 2015 at 5:43 PM Wow Laura, you have captured the essence of your visual beautifully here. Loved it and GL Laura Leiser June 7, 2015 at 6:17 PM Thank you, Mark, for you kind and generous comments :)

Paul Callus June 7, 2015 at 1:29 PM Love lost in the cold, shadowy imagery. Sad, but expressive. gl in the contest. // paul Laura Leiser June 7, 2015 at 2:36 PM Thank you for stopping by, Paul. I really appreciate your comments, too :)

Casarah Nance June 7, 2015 at 9:10 AM Chilling and beautiful, wonderfully presented! Laura Leiser June 7, 2015 at 2:35 PM Thank you, Casarah! I'm glad you liked it :)

Judy Konos June 6, 2015 at 6:48 PM Good one Laura....I enjoyed much Laura Leiser June 6, 2015 at 6:55 PM Thanks, Judy! I appreciate you stopping by to comment :)

Jan Allison June 6, 2015 at 2:54 PM Lovely take on the visual Laura - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx Laura Leiser June 6, 2015 at 4:26 PM Thanks so much, Jan! I appreciate you kind comments :)