Night Train

the train blows in a hurry
Travelling from city to city
making a route for the night
today is Tuesday and it is cold

perspectives are average or weak
no progress or big positivism
no great impulse nor great time
lethargic Octobery times of the year
not to mention these emotions

A sea of uncertainties and criticism
A torment of hypothesis and thoughts
A crisis of emptiness and teeth cracking moments
writing white sh*ts of paper.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Wolf Avatar
March 14, 2021 at 8:31 AM
Seems to me that this could be an intriguing 'entry in a diary.' Maybe I'm (way) off though. At any rate, enjoyed pondering your write, Vasco. Magic moments, Gershon
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March 14, 2021 at 12:20 PM
Thank you so much Gershon, Yes indeed it's some kind of diary entry indeed! Best wishes Vasco
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