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Night Train

the train blows in a hurry Travelling from city to city making a route for the night today is Tuesday and it is cold perspectives are average or weak no progress or big positivism no great impulse nor great time lethargic Octobery times of the year not to mention these emotions A sea of uncertainties and criticism A torment of hypothesis and thoughts A crisis of emptiness and teeth cracking moments writing white sh*ts of paper.

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Date: 3/14/2021 8:31:00 AM
Seems to me that this could be an intriguing 'entry in a diary.' Maybe I'm (way) off though. At any rate, enjoyed pondering your write, Vasco. Magic moments, Gershon
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Vasco Ludovice
Date: 3/14/2021 12:20:00 PM
Thank you so much Gershon, Yes indeed it's some kind of diary entry indeed! Best wishes Vasco

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