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Night Time's Starlight Moon

night time’s starlight moon
curdles the whey of longing
clouds mask heart’s desire
trembling arms reach out to you
train whistles haunt the captives

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Poet Destroyer A

December 7, 2012 at 3:42 PM

very gripping..pd

Tara Jennings

February 22, 2011 at 6:35 AM

this is beautiful and haunting, thank you for your comment

Phyllis Babcock

February 20, 2011 at 8:21 AM

I can feel the longing in this beautiful write. soup mail love phyl

Michael J. Falotico

February 20, 2011 at 5:24 AM

Very nice Debbie, image and sounds both grab the reader...enjoyed always with luv Michael

Andrea Dietrich

February 20, 2011 at 1:08 AM

Oh, I love the way you blended in those train whistles, sound with the sight!

Kash Poet

February 19, 2011 at 5:42 PM

Beautiful picture of night you have penned here Debbie.Love it.

Sara Kendrick

February 19, 2011 at 4:49 PM

Good one..Very descriptive and expressive work..Sara

John Rhinem

February 19, 2011 at 4:22 PM

Smile* ~ A souring; a concealing; a burning passion; and a continuum of hearts chains perhaps, unto the wallls of something extremely beautiful such as that we call, "Pure 'Sweeet Love!!!'" ~ This is what my humbled eyes somewhat do find amid this magnificently painted canvas of splendid expression, my dear ~ "Simply 'Beautiful' &, 'A RedHeartDiamond Fave.'" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love, 'Forevermore,'" John!:) ~

John Rhinem

February 19, 2011 at 4:12 PM

Smile* ~ I find sooo much amazing depth amid these four lines of wonderfully brushed verse "My Dear, 'Beautiful & Gifted, Debra Guzzi!!!'" ~ Although, I find not anything close unto, "Lovely Carolyns," reflections in part towards its stirring images although what I do somewhat find is, aside from the usual for the most brilliance amid, "Your Beauties, 'Wonderful Creations of Poetic Art!!!'" ~ Cont:)

Robert Pettit

February 19, 2011 at 3:56 PM

An interesting write. Is the writer on an overnight train bound for somewhere?

Carolyn Devonshire

February 19, 2011 at 3:28 PM

You poem reminds me of those who fled Germany by rail to escape Hitler's wrath. I know this is a love poem, but somehow that image stuck in my head. Nice work, Deb. Love, Carolyn