Night Time Fantasy Escape

Tis true, that would-be king imprisons me during daylight,
but with night my precious freedom soars in fantasy flight.
I return to where my treasured childhood still lives.
I caress each image my familiar land readily gives
and tenderly nurture each emotionally sown memory,
embracing the security such reminiscing swells in me.
Thus, in moon ruled night, my fighting resolution sets
and determines I shall escape this cruel nightmare yet.

His bride, his pawn – nay, these I shall never be
for my heart lies with he who dreams with me.
I feel him each night, just as I do my beloved land.
Both raise my ardor to heights supremely grand.
As I wonder the condition of my sweetheart man,
I dream our reunion is secured in tomorrow’s hand.
I feel him hold me, growing luscious thoughts deep,
I delight in his kiss as in bliss, I submit to new sleep.




Contest - Mysterious Nights ... Nayda Ivette Negron
December 20, 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 8/23/2017 12:42:00 PM
Congrats on your high place win for this contest. You have a fantastic imagination and its a different take on the contest. Well done :) Sunita
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Date: 8/23/2017 10:36:00 AM
Lovely fantasy CayCay, well worthy of honors...
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Date: 8/23/2017 3:53:00 AM
Caycay this is absolutely gorgeous I'm sosorry i missed reading it before I have missed you around the site and am delighted to see you on the winner's list:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/25/2016 2:20:00 PM
wow, what a great fantasy poem, Caycay. But methinks it is not a fantasy. This is you dreaming with and of your wonderful guy!! I came here also to say Merry Christmas, my very dear friend!!
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Date: 12/24/2016 1:01:00 PM
This is deep and romantic CayCay! So nice to read this wonderful poem this morning. It is almost Christmas and my daughter and boyfriend are taking us . out to lunch. I wish you the happiest of holidays my friend. Blessings, Connie ; )7
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Date: 12/22/2016 1:42:00 AM
Oh, this is so amazingly imaginative. I see, feel, and long for my love while reading your lines. If reading a poem can evoke such strong emotions, it is a GOOD poem. Poetry hugs, Darren
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Date: 12/21/2016 3:49:00 AM
What a heady flight-- beautiful. cay!..huggs
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Date: 12/21/2016 12:45:00 AM
Its Phantom of the Opera reinvented. Beautiful.
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Date: 12/20/2016 7:23:00 PM
Been there...done that. Therefore, I can relate. I do the same thing sometimes too. Just beautiful, CayCay. And yes, I agree that this poem reads aloud very nicely. Wonderful expression.
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Date: 12/20/2016 6:14:00 PM
Heavy sigh, CayCay. How wonderful it must be to have someone to share your life with. I love your poem:)
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Date: 12/20/2016 6:12:00 PM
Wow doesn't even cover this poem, it was so enchantingly beautiful, I could hear this as I read quietly. I feel this love and desire as if I were there. This poem breathes, it lives, it needs to read aloud and allowed to echo across the land. One of my favorites of your my friend. This was deeply touching.
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