NIGHT TIME

NIGHT TIME
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silent, dark, and deep
nighttime’s mysterious sleep
dreams, a secret keep

dreamnightsleepsenryu

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Line Gauthier

August 4, 2025 at 4:51 AM

lovely monorhyme ~

sara Etgen-Baker

August 4, 2025 at 4:51 PM

thank you! appreciate your complimentary words...!

Victor Buhagiar

August 4, 2025 at 2:37 AM

A lovely Senryu. Great imagery. And a beautiful picture too.

sara Etgen-Baker

August 4, 2025 at 4:52 PM

awww, thank you Victor! Appreciate you and your kind words. Have a pleasant evening, Sara

Gershon Wolf

August 3, 2025 at 8:11 PM

I love senryus that rhyme. This is a 'keeper,' methinks. ~ Gershon

sara Etgen-Baker

August 4, 2025 at 4:52 PM

good to know....until this one, I'd never written a rhyming senyru...perhaps more in my future. appreciate your visit and mindful comments, Sara

Joseph P. DiMino

August 3, 2025 at 7:49 PM

Beautiful, Sara; some say that one's spirit travels to higher heavens during sleep -- to be comforted and taught. I like to believe that is true. Lovely write.

sara Etgen-Baker

August 4, 2025 at 4:53 PM

I'd like to believe that's true as well. I think Carl Jung would agree with us as well. Appreciate your visit and insightful comments...have a blessed evening, Sara