NIGHT TIME

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NIGHT TIME ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ silent, dark, and deep nighttime’s mysterious sleep dreams, a secret keep

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/3/2025 8:11:00 PM

I love senryus that rhyme. This is a 'keeper,' methinks. ~ Gershon

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/3/2025 7:49:00 PM

Beautiful, Sara; some say that one's spirit travels to higher heavens during sleep -- to be comforted and taught. I like to believe that is true. Lovely write.

Bill Baker

Date: 8/3/2025 6:35:00 PM

Nicely written Senryu, Sara. I like it! Bill

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 8/3/2025 4:01:00 PM

Cute! I liked it! Good night dear Sara!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/3/2025 5:25:00 PM

thank you...have a pleasant evening!