Night Terrors

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Night terrors bring fear to my dreams at night unable to breathe, I gasp, terrified. I've experienced nightmares beyond fright and so intense that when woken, I've cried. I hear dead soldiers whisper in my head a constant murmur that morphs into screams. I utter prayers meant to ward off the dead, but they manifest themselves in my dreams. It oft starts with little more than a sigh, then suddenly, I'm overwhelmed by fear. Escalating, I feel like I will die, and awake, that fear doesn't disappear. War's agonizing, emotional pain, tortures me, over and over again. (Sonnet) 4/29/2021 Writing Prompt - Breathe - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Terry Miller

Date: 5/11/2021 7:15:00 AM

A great sonnet Emile fantastic images of a nightmare - Terry

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/11/2021 10:11:00 AM

Thanks Terry, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Constance La France

Date: 5/10/2021 1:49:00 PM

Emile, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Breathe - Challenge with this emotionally penned poem, I get nightmares also and I you described the feelings perfectly, well done, peace _Constance

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/10/2021 2:22:00 PM

Thanks Constance, your contest are always so interesting that they catch the attention of my muze every time my friend, Emile.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 4/29/2021 9:09:00 AM

Exceptional imagery, Emile. Did you ever consider these experiences may reflect those of your childhood? I'd like to think this is good writing, not a part of your personal history. In any case, terrifying.

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/29/2021 10:42:00 AM

Hi Milt, I wrote this to highlight what some Vets suffer as a form of "PTSD" Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder, after being subjected to war and the atrocities associated with war, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.