Night Sweats

black shapes ghost the night distant sirens curdle dreams crickets soothe my fear 08/17/12

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/21/2012 8:06:00 PM

JamesStopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/21/2012 10:22:00 AM

HI JIMBO .. MY SM IS NOT WORKING TO REPLY FOR SOME REASON BUT MY RIGHT HAND IS PARTIALLY PARALYZED AND BOTH HAVE NERVE DAMAGE AND RHUMATOID ARTHRITIS SO BARING MY CROSS WELL AS AM ABLE .. RON DOES ALL MY TYPING FOR NOW .. NO CURE BUT HAVE FAITH IN GOD'S WORD FOR TOTAL HEALING .. THANKXX FOR ASKING LUV .. HAVE A BLESSED DAY AND BE HAPPY.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/26/2012 3:01:00 PM

Ahh!...I like this one..The constant cricket sound can lull one to sleep..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara

Lynn Dolly

Date: 9/20/2012 4:17:00 PM

Oh my...crickets do have a soothing effect until a male wants to breed. Then you just want to kill them. Hehe. I really like this:)) Experienced this before..probably not in the same way..but you painted a good picture

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 9/7/2012 8:02:00 PM

Musthave had a night mare James; crickets can sure sing sweet lullabies though!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/7/2012 6:40:00 PM

James, it is always nice to read you... xox~PD

Jack Ellison

Date: 9/7/2012 4:58:00 PM

Familiar with all those, James! It's scary when all the lights are turned off eh! LOL Great Senryu!

Cynthia Alvez

Date: 9/6/2012 10:56:00 AM

Beautiful Senryu! Absolutely! Cynthia

Gwendolen Song

Date: 9/5/2012 6:39:00 PM

Such a unique haiku...and a calming background noise! Crickets do the very same for me! :) gwendolen

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/4/2012 2:46:00 PM

i am told that I might be perimenopausal....I have the same symptoms....My hubby keeps saying I am screaming and hitting him at night and I don't remember it?!