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Night Stalkers

Creatures prowling through the forest hunters and prey cloaked by dark curtain *for Brian's "As You Will" contest

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/10/2011 11:42:00 AM

You sure packed so much in these two lines, Carolyn-- and just with the right touch of foreboding-- and thanks...got tied up with some stuff but yup trying to see where else I can focus my attention-- hmm cooked teppanyaki today & started making tiramisu :D --hugs :)

Joe Maverick

Date: 5/8/2011 1:09:00 PM

a power and mystery in the write you have penned my friend, best winning wishes to you Carolyn with this piece!

Katherine Stella

Date: 5/8/2011 11:38:00 AM

this is fantastic write for brians contest I had to go and change write for the dr contest for I just found out syllable count for that is 7775 what a tough contest all are placing for us but love the challanger again thanks hun for your help and reviews keep em rocking here with your beautiful writes

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 5/8/2011 11:26:00 AM

Scary creatures for sure, Carolyn! When I was little the bogeyman lived in my closet. My friends, who spoke French, were terrified by Bonhomme Sept Heure. I think after he scared everyone to bed, he'd come and hide in my closet.:) I think he's still around, waiting to pouce on the naive and innocent. An enthralling read...BOO!! :) Love, Mikki

Kash Poet

Date: 5/8/2011 10:58:00 AM

Just wonderful,Visit me.....

Daver Austin

Date: 5/8/2011 10:49:00 AM

I can get into this scene. Frightening! Lots in a few words. Good show! Love, daver

Duncan Chappell

Date: 5/8/2011 5:37:00 AM

i like it my dear friend

James Fraser

Date: 5/7/2011 5:24:00 PM

The other side of nature that we hardly ever see unless on nature programmes. Good luck in Brian's contest with this fine Crystalline Carolyn....:)

Diane Locksley

Date: 5/7/2011 3:38:00 PM

Sounds ominous and spooky. Good luck in Brian's contest. Best to you, Diane

Kash Poet

Date: 5/7/2011 12:17:00 PM

Revisited this wonderful Crystalline....

Jack Horne

Date: 5/7/2011 7:04:00 AM

Yes, indeed - a very clever write : ) I loved the title too

Kash Poet

Date: 5/7/2011 1:14:00 AM

And under that dark curtain sometimes hunters become prey.isn't it?beautiful Crystalline.Best wishes Carolyn-kash

Wilma Neels

Date: 5/6/2011 10:03:00 PM

Love the visuals in this one and your title is so apt as well.. All the best for Brian's contest Carolyn ;) love Wilma

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/6/2011 8:20:00 PM

All looking the same in the dark! An interesting little write, CArolyn.

John Rhinem

Date: 5/6/2011 7:01:00 PM

Smile ~ I don't know about anyone else "My Dear, Precious & Beautiful Carolyn Devonshire!!!'" ~ But Thisss, sent chills up my spine for some reason? Maybe I need to lower the temp upon the air?? ~ Hope that "Your Beauty" is doing well and that life is treating "Your Wonders" splendidly, my dear ~ "Great Painting In Poe" ~ "Love, 'Always,'" John!) ~