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Night Sounds

While gazing at wonders of star gleams, listened to wild quail as they cooed dreams. Up and down dry riverbed came cries of night birds exploring darkened skies. Warm-blanket sounds to erase day's rush Slowly sounds fade, night deepens to hush. November 11, 2022

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Date: 12/4/2022 10:18:00 AM
So evocative, I really like 'night birds exploring darkened skies' and 'night deepens to hush' - I agree, it is the perfect closing line~
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Date: 11/13/2022 3:01:00 PM
nice nature poem. The last two lines are so cool.
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Date: 11/13/2022 3:12:00 AM
lovely write enjoyed the ended with a simple hush ..hugs
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Date: 11/12/2022 8:34:00 PM
Wow, this is so lovely, Ann, a wonderful poem, with such an inspirational last line...Harry
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Date: 11/12/2022 10:21:00 AM
What a great ending! Aloha!
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Ann Peck
Date: 11/28/2022 2:55:00 PM
Thanks, Rico! Aloha!
Date: 11/11/2022 11:04:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Ann. Enjoyed the images of night you convey.
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Ann Peck
Date: 11/11/2022 11:35:00 AM
Thank you so much, Vijay!

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