Night Song

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Into old comfort zones, honed from a million years before,   
a reclining evening slips gently down the trees     
Pensive cricket songs, uncoil from the thickets now,       
and spiral upwards upon a hem of a sinking sun     

A reclining evening slips gently down the trees    
The stars appear, and settle into constellation memories,                
and spiral upwards upon a hem of a sinking sun
The laughter of a summer day is put to rest 
                   
The stars appear, and settle into constellation memories 
Pensive cricket songs uncoil from the thickets now
The laughter of a summer day is put to rest,
into old comfort zones, honed from a million years before
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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George   Avatar
July 28, 2011 at 2:05 AM
Beautiful Pantoum, Carrie. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie
Guzzi Avatar
July 27, 2011 at 8:20 PM
Very good pick for a looping form the concept of infinity in the seasons and in the stars! Congrad's Carrie Light & Love
Sweetheart Avatar
July 27, 2011 at 4:24 PM
Congrats Carrie on your amazing win in Pantoum with this wonderful piece luv..
Williams Avatar
July 27, 2011 at 2:13 PM
hey Carrie, congrats on a great win, David
Mantle Avatar
July 27, 2011 at 1:31 PM
Many congrats Carrie on your win in Paula's contest. Best wishes Em :)
Well Avatar
July 27, 2011 at 11:43 AM
Beautiful poem and well deserved win! Sharon.
Onclaud Avatar
July 27, 2011 at 10:52 AM
another crown of perfect imagery, carrie..applause to you for the thrilling win! ..:) huggs!
Brown Avatar
July 27, 2011 at 10:50 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula Swanson's "Pantoum" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Brown Avatar
July 18, 2011 at 11:38 AM
I am stopping by to thank you so much for your comments. They are truly appreciated. Wishing you a wonderful week full of inspiration Carrie. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
July 14, 2011 at 6:55 PM
Quite beautiful Carrie and a sure winner. Love, Joyce
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