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Night Song

* * * * * * * Into old comfort zones, honed from a million years before, a reclining evening slips gently down the trees Pensive cricket songs, uncoil from the thickets now, and spiral upwards upon a hem of a sinking sun A reclining evening slips gently down the trees The stars appear, and settle into constellation memories, and spiral upwards upon a hem of a sinking sun The laughter of a summer day is put to rest The stars appear, and settle into constellation memories Pensive cricket songs uncoil from the thickets now The laughter of a summer day is put to rest, into old comfort zones, honed from a million years before

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Date: 7/28/2011 2:05:00 AM
Beautiful Pantoum, Carrie. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie
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Date: 7/27/2011 8:20:00 PM
Very good pick for a looping form the concept of infinity in the seasons and in the stars! Congrad's Carrie Light & Love
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Date: 7/27/2011 4:24:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your amazing win in Pantoum with this wonderful piece luv..
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Date: 7/27/2011 2:13:00 PM
hey Carrie, congrats on a great win, David
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Date: 7/27/2011 1:31:00 PM
Many congrats Carrie on your win in Paula's contest. Best wishes Em :)
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Date: 7/27/2011 11:43:00 AM
Beautiful poem and well deserved win! Sharon.
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Date: 7/27/2011 10:52:00 AM
another crown of perfect imagery, carrie..applause to you for the thrilling win! ..:) huggs!
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Date: 7/27/2011 10:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula Swanson's "Pantoum" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/18/2011 11:38:00 AM
I am stopping by to thank you so much for your comments. They are truly appreciated. Wishing you a wonderful week full of inspiration Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/14/2011 7:13:00 PM
Nice flow Carrie~ tricky Form~ but....you have conquered~ BEAUTIFUL.......god bless~ Congrats on a nice write.............^Rick
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Date: 7/14/2011 6:55:00 PM
Quite beautiful Carrie and a sure winner. Love, Joyce
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