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Night Sky I

NIGHT SKY I night sky big dipper little dipper wet feet starry eyes night sky clear as a bell shooting star ding! night sky moon big and orange zoom in zoom away night sky gadzillion stars midnight express

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/9/2012 4:22:00 PM

wow, awesome imagery, Daver. LOVE this.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/9/2012 2:23:00 PM

Ah, a gadzillion stars and you still managed to find the shootng star. Hope you made a wish, Daver. Love the way you describe the dippers as having wet feeet and starry eyes. Very, very nice! Love, Carolyn

M. Hussain Effendi

Date: 5/8/2012 11:13:00 PM

This reminds me how long it has been since I've gazed up in the sky at night, and I can't wait until dark now after reading this beautiful peace. Thank you, sir.

James Peranteau

Date: 5/8/2012 5:31:00 PM

Ah...did ya get to see that extremely large moon on the 5th of this month ? This write just sparks up my imagination dear poet ! Your write just sent me to the.......MOON ! *smiles* Have a wonderful night my friend ! Much love, james

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 5/8/2012 9:54:00 AM

Davey lad, these astral things leave me spellbound, you found the night and gave it to me in the most amazing way.

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 5/7/2012 8:44:00 PM

If I had a decent singing voice I'd try to sing this out into the night, Daver! But alas, I think if I tried I'd only wake up every dog in the neighbourhood.:) Lots happening here, this is so very clear and visual. Like this a whole bunch!! Love, Mikki

Shirley Long

Date: 5/7/2012 10:12:00 AM

This is a very good poem about night sky, it was well-written, and I enjoyed reading it today.