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Night Sky

Hallow night sky before life ere long Twirling in colour a flying milky way Sighing Venus eyes murmur a song Heavenly planets twinkle such prey Erewhile respire and magic flatter By shinning a moon a star everyday To capture th' soon th' past laughter And move on bay's like pluto's array Like Jupitar mars a mallicious force Like thousands search a fault in art Hallow night sky an endless course Magnificent texture never will apart Nor call or hide your pure vivid spy Hail you forever where you belong 01/04/207

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Honestly J.T.

Date: 7/19/2017 2:24:00 PM

awesome imagery. well done -JT

Talin Kalishian
Date: 7/19/2017 2:31:00 PM

Thankx

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 6/16/2017 4:39:00 PM

7 Need I say more

Edward Mccall

Date: 5/12/2017 7:53:00 AM

What a beautiful image of the night sky Talin. Well done.

Phil Capitano

Date: 5/12/2017 7:21:00 AM

Wonderfully composed. Keep up the good work Talin.

Talin Kalishian
Date: 5/12/2017 7:40:00 AM

Great joy to hear from you again capitan ;)) Thankx

James Marshall Goff

Date: 5/2/2017 7:27:00 PM

lines 3/4...Talin...magic...nice work!

Talin Kalishian
Date: 5/3/2017 3:29:00 AM

Thankx James good to heqr from you again :)) God bless

White Wolf

Date: 4/30/2017 8:32:00 PM

Wow, you have done an amazing job to list all of these in your sonnet, Talin! I know this is for the contest, so like again at Jupiter! Well done entirely.

Talin Kalishian
Date: 5/1/2017 9:00:00 AM

Thankx Rick :))