Talin Kalishian Poet Sonnet

Night Sky

Hallow night sky before life ere long
Twirling in colour a flying milky way
Sighing Venus eyes murmur a song 
Heavenly planets twinkle such prey
Erewhile respire and magic flatter
By shinning a moon a star everyday
To capture th' soon th' past laughter
And move on bay's like pluto's array
Like Jupitar mars a mallicious force
Like thousands search a fault in art

Hallow night sky an endless course
Magnificent texture never will apart
Nor call or hide your pure vivid spy
Hail you forever where you belong

01/04/207

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Honestly J.T. July 19, 2017 at 2:24 PM awesome imagery. well done -JT Talin Kalishian July 19, 2017 at 2:31 PM Thankx

Christopher Flaherty June 16, 2017 at 4:39 PM 7 Need I say more

Edward Mccall May 12, 2017 at 7:53 AM What a beautiful image of the night sky Talin. Well done.

Phil Capitano May 12, 2017 at 7:21 AM Wonderfully composed. Keep up the good work Talin. Talin Kalishian May 12, 2017 at 7:40 AM Great joy to hear from you again capitan ;)) Thankx

James Marshall Goff May 2, 2017 at 7:27 PM lines 3/4...Talin...magic...nice work! Talin Kalishian May 3, 2017 at 3:29 AM Thankx James good to heqr from you again :)) God bless

White Wolf April 30, 2017 at 8:32 PM Wow, you have done an amazing job to list all of these in your sonnet, Talin! I know this is for the contest, so like again at Jupiter! Well done entirely. Talin Kalishian May 1, 2017 at 9:00 AM Thankx Rick :))