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Night sky A velvet drape Pinned with clustered stars Celestial little diamond gems Aloft Feb. 25, 2022 (originally written 12/28/16) published in P.S. Anthology 1 Was POTD on March 20th, 2017 For: The Night Sky Poetry Contest Sponsored by Anna Marie Kaianah Placed 2nd in contest

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Date: 5/6/2022 10:07:00 AM
Beautiful gem Paulette that leaves a sparkling place in the heart! Lovely use of metaphor! Congratulations on your win! Blessings! I too love looking at the night sky. This was such a fun theme that brought out so many wonderful poems.
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Date: 5/2/2022 9:36:00 PM
I love the beauty of the night sky in your awesome cinquain my dear friend, Paulette. Big CONGRATS on your win! Thanks for sharing. God bless! Hugs
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Date: 5/3/2022 4:01:00 PM
Thank you Len~I too love the night sky. :)Paulette
Date: 5/1/2022 7:33:00 AM
Congratulations! Short yet pinned with substance!
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Date: 5/3/2022 4:01:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed it. :)Paulette
Date: 5/1/2022 6:53:00 AM
Great Cinquain. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/3/2022 4:01:00 PM
Thank you Christuraj. :)Paulette
Date: 5/1/2022 12:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Paulette! <3 ~Anna Kaianah
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Date: 5/3/2022 4:00:00 PM
Thank you Anna Marie~glad to have the honor to place in your delightful contest. :)Paulette
Date: 11/18/2021 2:26:00 PM
So pretty, Paulette! Congratulations!
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Date: 11/20/2021 10:07:00 AM
Thanks Kim~
Date: 10/18/2021 6:26:00 PM
What a superb image of the night sky, star lit. A winner indeed. Congratulations! Brian
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/19/2021 6:23:00 AM
Hi Brian, Thank you~ I find my strength in writing is to use my palette of words. Take Care, Paulette
Date: 3/5/2021 1:01:00 PM
Pretty!
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Date: 2/23/2021 5:13:00 AM
Ahhh!! Enjoyed reading your winner. Congrats. Sara
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 2/27/2021 9:26:00 AM
Hi Sara, Glad you enjoyed it. The night sky seems to draw us in, a celestial extravaganza, no matter how often we visit it. Have a great day. Paulette
Date: 2/21/2021 6:50:00 AM
Paula, such a pretty poem, I love it and congrats on your win _Constance
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 2/27/2021 9:23:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by to comment on “Night Sky”and my recognition in the contest. I am sure you will agree, the night sky holds a magical feeling, it never loses its charm. Take Care ...Paulette
Date: 10/8/2020 6:12:00 AM
Hello Paulette, I like the way you describe the night sky. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/10/2020 11:41:00 AM
You are welcome Paulette.Enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 10/10/2020 8:20:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading and commenting on my Night Sky.
Date: 10/7/2020 11:01:00 PM
Great description of night sky! ~ Ani
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/10/2020 8:20:00 AM
Anitha, Thank You.
Date: 3/13/2018 6:35:00 PM
Nice little poem. I've used those words in a few of my writes. Glad you liked my The Young Girl :)
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Date: 1/18/2017 10:33:00 AM
Very nice Paulette, lovely imagery.
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Date: 1/17/2017 4:54:00 PM
Something to almost touch. Congratulations Paulette.
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Date: 1/16/2017 5:36:00 PM
Beautiful and succinct, Paulettte. Congrats on your win.
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 1/16/2017 8:03:00 PM
Agnes, and congratulations to you too. Your work is packaged with beautiful imagery!!!
Date: 12/28/2016 4:20:00 PM
Beautiful short poem. Paulette, I admire the way you painted this like stars would paint the sky.
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Date: 12/29/2016 6:55:00 PM
Thank You for your encouraging comment!
Date: 12/28/2016 12:06:00 PM
This was beautiful and quite enchanting in its brevity. You've painted the night sky on a poetic canvas and it is gorgeous.
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 12/29/2016 6:56:00 PM
Thank You. Yes, I love writing pieces short and concise; little packages of imagery!
Date: 12/28/2016 10:39:00 AM
A wonderful poem, Paulette. Eloquent and beautiful. It paints the background for so many stories, it feels like below the poem with an arrow pointing up it should say "insert your fantasy here". Truly excellent.
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