Lucilla Carrillo Poet Free verse

Night Sky

As I watch the night sky , filled with stars, 
I feel that the wind is like your hand 
caressing my face. Your eyes are like streams
that travel to my heart and fill it with love.

A million stars in the night sky adorned the moon
on that special night as we sat together under the 
moon light. The words of love that you whispered
to me - will forever fill my heart and soul with love.

The night sky is beautiful, with all the stars lighting
up this night. Watching the moon surrounded by them
is just pure delight.

As I sit here on this beautiful night, watching the 
milky way in all it's beauty - I wonder if you are 
somewhere up there watching over me... 

03/27/2014
Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo
For Contest

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Robert Lindley May 31, 2014 at 10:51 AM A truly beautiful heartfelt write. Such love, I am sure up there your beloved is watching you and quite pleased too. Great write!!!!!!! Lucilla Carrillo May 31, 2014 at 10:59 AM Thank you so much Robert; I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Mel Merrill April 8, 2014 at 12:02 AM Hi Lucilla. A cool poem--and an interesting question at the end. I'd say, yes! ;) Mel Lucilla Carrillo April 20, 2014 at 8:05 PM Thank you and about the question - I know he does. Lucilla Carrillo April 8, 2014 at 6:49 AM Thanks for reading. I too want to believe that our loved ones watch over us after they leave.

Julie Heckman April 7, 2014 at 6:18 PM Very nicely done Lucilla the night time is such a magical place. I like to think that those loved ones who have passed away are looking down on me...Julie Lucilla Carrillo April 8, 2014 at 6:52 AM Hi Julie; thanks for reading. I love to watch the sky when it's full of stars. I tjhink they do watch over us.

Robert Andrew Lyle April 6, 2014 at 3:06 PM What a beautiful night and the wonder of our gaze as we watch the firmament unfold before our eyes. Great write Lucilla Andy Lucilla Carrillo April 6, 2014 at 4:35 PM Hi Andy; Thank you so much for your nice comment. I do love to watch the stare at night.

Arthur Vaso April 4, 2014 at 10:09 PM Hi there, I have been away for awhile, how nice to return here and read such a beautiful poem!!! :) Lucilla Carrillo April 5, 2014 at 2:57 AM Thank you and I am glad to see you back. Hope you are doing good.

Poet Destroyer A April 2, 2014 at 5:44 PM HI LUCY, Congratulations on your winning poem.... xox~ Linda Lucilla Carrillo April 3, 2014 at 11:14 PM Thank you Linda, I was not sure if it would win.

Shadow Hamilton April 2, 2014 at 7:35 AM poignant and lovely write Lucilla congrats on win hugs Lucilla Carrillo April 3, 2014 at 11:13 PM Thank you , I am glad that you like it.

Skat A April 2, 2014 at 12:20 AM LUCY:) Congratulations, ON YOUR WIN ~SKAT~ Lucilla Carrillo April 3, 2014 at 11:13 PM Thank you Skat.

Nette Onclaud April 1, 2014 at 1:58 PM absolutely pensive and soulfully depicted, lucy.. a well-deserved win in my contest!.. best cheers with huggs! Lucilla Carrillo April 3, 2014 at 11:11 PM Thank you much for the consideration.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 1, 2014 at 3:49 AM - Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: - A NIGHT SKY - Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud, Lucilla ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Lucilla Carrillo April 1, 2014 at 10:18 AM Thank you AnneLise.

Dr.Ram Mehta April 1, 2014 at 1:03 AM Enjoyed the write creating a nice picture and congrats on the win, lucilla Lucilla Carrillo April 1, 2014 at 10:19 AM Thank you so much DR. Ram for reading the poem.

Matthew Anish March 28, 2014 at 2:14 PM Nice similes here! Have you ever read Tolkien's writings? Peace &Love Matthew Anish Lucilla Carrillo March 28, 2014 at 3:45 PM Thank you for reading my poem. I have never read the writings.

Mark Peterson March 27, 2014 at 11:50 PM Beautiful and supernal in its lovely prose and intent. I revel in the wonder and majesty of the night sky and am instantly captivated by poetry of this sort--especially when it flows with a message of love. Lucilla Carrillo March 27, 2014 at 11:57 PM Thank you Mark, I just wrote that to see if it did good. Glad that you like it.

Andrea Dietrich March 27, 2014 at 8:36 PM So beautiful. I loved the part about the wind like "your hand caressing my face." I have a question on the third line.Did you mean to say "eyes are like steams"? I am guessing it's a typo and you meant streams. That would make more sense for me. Good wishes in the contest, dear. Lucilla Carrillo March 27, 2014 at 11:03 PM Thank you Andrea. I am glad that you pointed that out. I fixes it.

Robert Pettit March 27, 2014 at 7:01 PM Very nicely written, Lucilla. I think Nette will give this entry serious consideration. Lucilla Carrillo March 27, 2014 at 11:04 PM Thank you Robert; we'll see what happens.

Chuck Melugin March 27, 2014 at 4:53 PM Lucilla, The imagery paints a wonderful painting of the Night Sky! Awesome pen 7 My best, chuck Lucilla Carrillo March 27, 2014 at 5:29 PM Thank you so much. I'm glad that you liked it.

Liam Mcdaid March 27, 2014 at 3:54 PM very beautifully crafted excellent piece Lucilla Carrillo March 27, 2014 at 4:09 PM Thank you so much Liam for your nice comment.

Anne-Lise Andresen March 27, 2014 at 3:22 PM - A beautiful poem for the contest Lucilla my friend - A "dreamy / longing" romantic poem - Welcome to read my suggestion ... posted today. - Good luck in the contet, hope to see you on the winning list :))) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Lucilla Carrillo March 27, 2014 at 3:48 PM Thank you Anne Lise. I have not entered any contests in a long time. I will check you out.