night sky

foreign ministry
	a universe united ~
		sign the dotted line
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Ashley Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 8:25 AM
Oh! Dear Linda, I adore the use of language and imagery of this amazing galactic haiku. Each line a "night sky" gem but especially so in your clever last line, "sign the dotted line". Skywriting your name across the stars - perfect! Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
Fowler Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 1:29 PM
Many thanks dear sweet Susan. I always appreciate your positivity my friend! :)
Dietrich Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 1:25 PM
Hmmm, this is sure interesting. I am thinking of it as a metaphor for the glaxies?
Fowler Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 1:51 PM
Yes indeed - thanks for noticing Andrea!
Andresen Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 10:40 AM
- (Antony J. Blinken? )... I thought he went to bed early :) - From joke ...to serious - A excellent haiku, Linda :) - hugs
Fowler Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 5:03 PM
LOL Anne-Lise. I always appreciate your visits and comments. hugs :)
Goldsmith Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 9:50 AM
Another wonderful Haiku write. I enjoy the night sky. This week is a double moon. Have a great day writing away.............
Fowler Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 2:26 PM
Hi Paula. Thanks for all your visits and time to read and comment. I appreciate you. :)
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