Night Sky

foreign ministry a universe united ~ sign the dotted line

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Susan Ashley

Date: 8/31/2023 8:25:00 AM

Oh! Dear Linda, I adore the use of language and imagery of this amazing galactic haiku. Each line a "night sky" gem but especially so in your clever last line, "sign the dotted line". Skywriting your name across the stars - perfect! Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/31/2023 1:29:00 PM

Many thanks dear sweet Susan. I always appreciate your positivity my friend! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/30/2023 1:25:00 PM

Hmmm, this is sure interesting. I am thinking of it as a metaphor for the glaxies?

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/30/2023 1:51:00 PM

Yes indeed - thanks for noticing Andrea!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/29/2023 10:40:00 AM

- (Antony J. Blinken? )... I thought he went to bed early :) - From joke ...to serious - A excellent haiku, Linda :) - hugs

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/29/2023 5:03:00 PM

LOL Anne-Lise. I always appreciate your visits and comments. hugs :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/29/2023 9:50:00 AM

Another wonderful Haiku write. I enjoy the night sky. This week is a double moon. Have a great day writing away.............

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/29/2023 2:26:00 PM

Hi Paula. Thanks for all your visits and time to read and comment. I appreciate you. :)