Night Skies

Night Skies

                         When the night comes I feel another way
                         It is as though my heart feel a bitter sway.
                         A sway that has the cause of hate that comes late
                         A lateness that brings me to feel that love has locked its gate.

                         Still the loneliness of that want haunts a change
                         A change that gives me a chance to exchange.
                         Exchange what I need to feel from the want
                         Because the meaning of love starts out front.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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October 1, 2017 at 12:03 AM
Thank you for your inspiration and review on my poem I thoroughly enjoyed this work and I'm happy to see such a great creativity in you. It was a beauty to read your Punam rhetorical devices made your poem more interesting. I have written on Times of India in part 2 and part 3 if you get time can you please review at least one of them?
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