Night Shoes

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dance …

dance, the dragon
I watch intently, as if it taunts me
your perfect calf, its tattooed home
gams surround you on the
dance floor like a forest of velvet flesh
hopping, darting, spinning …
the small hummingbird on your
other ankle flutters -
as if in a constant bid to
escape the fire-breathing specter that
clings fiercely to the gentle slope
of your opposite foreleg
golden eyes afire …
I sit this one out
but I'm enthralled by your solo -
unconcerned with the
crowd of couples about you
your slender arms meet like swan necks
entwining in a love rite ...
hips in a forth-and-back cadence -
hypnotizing me as your
ruffled hem swishes … swishes … swishes …
curvilinear body alive with
spicy voltaic motion -
eyes closed to the pounding
prismatic pulse of colored lights and
seething subwoofers …
you move slowly ...
tender and deliberate
yet intense …
innately sensual, though you are unaware
your naive charm and innocence
are the blades that slay me
all the while the dragon chases …
the bird bounces and flits …
and I sip my Milagro Select like a
long-forgotten lover -
dreaming of the perfectly plump
pink-painted piggies ...
wriggling playfully inside ...

your favorite night shoes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 5/25/2019 7:07:00 AM
SERIOUSLY! I'm waiting for you to be discovered. I LOVE how your mind works - I'm not gay unless it means happy to read such great poetry. I'd pinpoint the exceptional lines in this but I've only got 300 letters left. I must say though that you pull the reader onto the dance floor willingly or not - special stuff.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/25/2019 5:45:00 PM
I'm really pleased that you enjoyed this one, Craig, and I knew your extraordinary insight would see the layers and the depth, (along with the "surface fun") ... didn't fare in the contest, but these comments will do nicely! Congrats on your placement, by the way - well done! :-D
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