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dance … dance, the dragon I watch intently, as if it taunts me your perfect calf, its tattooed home gams surround you on the dance floor like a forest of velvet flesh hopping, darting, spinning … the small hummingbird on your other ankle flutters - as if in a constant bid to escape the fire-breathing specter that clings fiercely to the gentle slope of your opposite foreleg golden eyes afire … I sit this one out but I'm enthralled by your solo - unconcerned with the crowd of couples about you your slender arms meet like swan necks entwining in a love rite ... hips in a forth-and-back cadence - hypnotizing me as your ruffled hem swishes … swishes … swishes … curvilinear body alive with spicy voltaic motion - eyes closed to the pounding prismatic pulse of colored lights and seething subwoofers … you move slowly ... tender and deliberate yet intense … innately sensual, though you are unaware your naive charm and innocence are the blades that slay me all the while the dragon chases … the bird bounces and flits … and I sip my Milagro Select like a long-forgotten lover - dreaming of the perfectly plump pink-painted piggies ... wriggling playfully inside ... your favorite night shoes.

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Date: 5/25/2019 7:07:00 AM
SERIOUSLY! I'm waiting for you to be discovered. I LOVE how your mind works - I'm not gay unless it means happy to read such great poetry. I'd pinpoint the exceptional lines in this but I've only got 300 letters left. I must say though that you pull the reader onto the dance floor willingly or not - special stuff.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/25/2019 5:45:00 PM
I'm really pleased that you enjoyed this one, Craig, and I knew your extraordinary insight would see the layers and the depth, (along with the "surface fun") ... didn't fare in the contest, but these comments will do nicely! Congrats on your placement, by the way - well done! :-D

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