For Bitesize No121 Poetry Contest sponsored by Line Gauthier
The sun was so friendly, he shot out a ray, but when nighttime approached, he could no longer stay. The sun hit the ocean, and the moon hit the sky as the stars twinkled Helios a bashful goodbye. But ol' Sol will be back, so you needn't weep - he'll return in the morning when stars go to sleep.
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