Phyllis Babcock Poet Personification

Night Serenade

The wind rustled through the trees
forming a whispering melody 
the higher pitches made a whistling sound
while the lower pitches were soft moans
as the wind intensified and released
in harmony a song was created that
only nature understood
it continued with a definite rhythm
now accompanied by a drum roll 
as hands of  thunder joined in
they both took a deep breath
started their harmony 
enjoying a night serenade.

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Silent One March 1, 2020 at 5:29 AM Oh i found this so serene, such a delicate and beautiful poem... I hope you are well... Phyllis Babcock March 3, 2020 at 10:07 PM Thanks for your comment S1. Going thru the winter blues at the moment and so ready for spring. love phyl

Robertina B. February 27, 2020 at 9:22 PM Such a splendid poem, Phyllis.. Flows so perfectly and lovely! Really enjoyed.. Blessings..

Michael Thompson February 21, 2020 at 6:12 PM Beautiful poem. I really enjoy nature poems. Mickey Phyllis Babcock February 27, 2020 at 11:03 AM Thanks for your comment. love phyl

Joseph May February 18, 2020 at 6:55 AM Nature forms its own band, Wonderful write Phyllis Phyllis Babcock February 21, 2020 at 12:18 PM Thanks for your comment and yes nature does play beautiful music. love phyl

Barry Stebbings February 17, 2020 at 1:23 PM The intoxicating rhythms of nature. Very well done. // Barry Phyllis Babcock February 21, 2020 at 12:18 PM Thanks Barry for your comment and yes nature does play many rhythms. love phyl

Andrea Dietrich February 14, 2020 at 7:32 PM oh this is so lovely Phyllis. I see you so seldom , it's wonderful to see this tonight. Happy Valentine Day. Phyllis Babcock February 16, 2020 at 4:08 PM Hope you had a lovely Valentine's day too Andrea. I hope to be writing more but somehow the words do not want to come. Hope all is well with you. love phyl

Connie Marcum Wong February 14, 2020 at 6:42 PM Wow Phyl, your poem enchanted my senses. I am putting this beauty into my faves! Have a wonderful week end my friend! xxoo Phyllis Babcock February 16, 2020 at 4:05 PM Thanks for putting this into one of your fav. love phyl

Jack Horne February 5, 2020 at 2:21 PM oh, this is lovely, Phyl. Hope all's well there, my friend x Phyllis Babcock February 16, 2020 at 4:05 PM Thanks Jack. Yes all is well and first year that I have had a great winter health wise. Spring feels like it is in the air and looking forward to that time. Hope all is well with you too. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen February 5, 2020 at 5:15 AM - A beautiful melody, dear Phyllis - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Phyllis Babcock February 16, 2020 at 4:03 PM Thanks AnneLise and yes nature can serenade us. love phyl

Connie Marcum Wong February 4, 2020 at 7:46 PM Mother nature makes her own beautiful music Phyl, I agree. A lovely poem my friend. xxoo Phyllis Babcock February 16, 2020 at 4:03 PM Thanks Connie. Nature does have it's own music for sure. Love the sounds of the ocean or running water. love phyl

Lindsay Laurie February 4, 2020 at 6:42 PM Hello Phyllis … inside the safety of a home, Mother Nature's natural band is a sound so powerful, and we understand - thank you Phyllis - Lindsay Phyllis Babcock February 16, 2020 at 4:01 PM Thanks for your comment Lindsay and yes nature can play some powerful music. love phyl