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Night Serenade

The wind rustled through the trees forming a whispering melody the higher pitches made a whistling sound while the lower pitches were soft moans as the wind intensified and released in harmony a song was created that only nature understood it continued with a definite rhythm now accompanied by a drum roll as hands of thunder joined in they both took a deep breath started their harmony enjoying a night serenade.

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Date: 3/1/2020 5:29:00 AM
Oh i found this so serene, such a delicate and beautiful poem... I hope you are well...
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 3/3/2020 10:07:00 PM
Thanks for your comment S1. Going thru the winter blues at the moment and so ready for spring. love phyl
Date: 2/27/2020 9:22:00 PM
Such a splendid poem, Phyllis.. Flows so perfectly and lovely! Really enjoyed.. Blessings..
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Date: 2/21/2020 6:12:00 PM
Beautiful poem. I really enjoy nature poems. Mickey
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 2/27/2020 11:03:00 AM
Thanks for your comment. love phyl
Date: 2/18/2020 6:55:00 AM
Nature forms its own band, Wonderful write Phyllis
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 2/21/2020 12:18:00 PM
Thanks for your comment and yes nature does play beautiful music. love phyl
Date: 2/17/2020 1:23:00 PM
The intoxicating rhythms of nature. Very well done. // Barry
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 2/21/2020 12:18:00 PM
Thanks Barry for your comment and yes nature does play many rhythms. love phyl
Date: 2/14/2020 7:32:00 PM
oh this is so lovely Phyllis. I see you so seldom , it's wonderful to see this tonight. Happy Valentine Day.
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 2/16/2020 4:08:00 PM
Hope you had a lovely Valentine's day too Andrea. I hope to be writing more but somehow the words do not want to come. Hope all is well with you. love phyl
Date: 2/14/2020 6:42:00 PM
Wow Phyl, your poem enchanted my senses. I am putting this beauty into my faves! Have a wonderful week end my friend! xxoo
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 2/16/2020 4:05:00 PM
Thanks for putting this into one of your fav. love phyl
Date: 2/5/2020 2:21:00 PM
oh, this is lovely, Phyl. Hope all's well there, my friend x
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 2/16/2020 4:05:00 PM
Thanks Jack. Yes all is well and first year that I have had a great winter health wise. Spring feels like it is in the air and looking forward to that time. Hope all is well with you too. love phyl
Date: 2/5/2020 5:15:00 AM
- A beautiful melody, dear Phyllis - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 2/16/2020 4:03:00 PM
Thanks AnneLise and yes nature can serenade us. love phyl
Date: 2/4/2020 7:46:00 PM
Mother nature makes her own beautiful music Phyl, I agree. A lovely poem my friend. xxoo
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 2/16/2020 4:03:00 PM
Thanks Connie. Nature does have it's own music for sure. Love the sounds of the ocean or running water. love phyl
Date: 2/4/2020 6:42:00 PM
Hello Phyllis … inside the safety of a home, Mother Nature's natural band is a sound so powerful, and we understand - thank you Phyllis - Lindsay
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 2/16/2020 4:01:00 PM
Thanks for your comment Lindsay and yes nature can play some powerful music. love phyl

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