Night Owl

It flies and settles on a tree branch,
waiting for fish to pop out of the lake,
to enjoy the moonlight.

A group of kids sits around a bonfire,
trembling with fright,
as they keenly listen to the owl's hooting.

"The bogeyman is being ushered in...."
one of the kids says, with a breaking tone......


Contest: Night Owl
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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February 16, 2015 at 1:16 AM
Teddy, Congratulations in Kelly D's contest. Always ~LINDA
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February 15, 2015 at 10:16 PM
Teddy, CONGRATS on your awesome placement ~ SKAT ~
Allison Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 2:56 PM
great descriptive story Teddy many congrats on your win
Kimathi Avatar
February 9, 2015 at 11:44 PM
Thank you so much Jan! ^_^
Deschler Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 2:42 PM
I remember this great entry from my "Night Owl" contest and it was nice to see it again, Teddy. Congrats on the win and thank you for participating!
Kimathi Avatar
February 9, 2015 at 11:41 PM
You are always welcome Kelly! ^_^ Thank you for congratulating my work and I! ^_^
Gorelick Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 4:54 PM
Nicely done, just what the kids would do and say. Congrats. BG
Kimathi Avatar
August 27, 2014 at 4:55 AM
Lol. You are right! Thank you BG! ^_^
A   Avatar
August 25, 2014 at 4:26 PM
Nice Win..>PD
Kimathi Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 7:43 AM
Thanks Linda! ^_^ <3
Eastman Avatar
August 25, 2014 at 11:29 AM
Congrats on the win.
Kimathi Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 7:40 AM
Thanks Carol! ^_^
Deschler Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 10:09 PM
This brought back some fun memories of campfires and ghost stories.... I only wish this poem were a bit longer, because I enjoyed it very much!.... Nice work, Teddy! Congrats on your win!
Kimathi Avatar
August 25, 2014 at 2:41 AM
I feel very glad you have loved my work Kelly! Thank you very much! ^_^
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