Premiere Contest WinnerNight Owl

Sitting by her open window
Was a girl deep in thought,
Lost within a book of Poe
A perfect poem she sought

With a curious eye
He watches her pen,
For she gives it a try
Every now and then

He will visit her forevermore
In silent hours of midnight,
Casting his shadow on her floor
Within the full moonlight

Mysterious, nocturnal bird
Calling out to darkened land,
Speaking such wise word
Which I cannot understand

I am lonely, I must confess
It's just you, me and the moon,
You are much like me, I guess
So, please sing me another tune

A messenger of death
Wailing songs of a banshee,
Has my grim reaper cometh
Was this warning meant for me?

My soul was projected
In the shadow of a fowl,
A raven I had expected
Not the silhouette of an owl!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Gauthier Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 4:58 PM
Charming poem ~ So glad to see it published in the 2020 PS Anthology, Kelly.
Deschler Avatar
November 14, 2023 at 4:12 PM
Thank you for reading my poem and your kind comments on it, Line :)
Gondolf Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 6:06 PM
Kelly, I enjoyed reading this poem in the anthology, congrats on having it included. John
Deschler Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 10:37 AM
Thank you for reading my poem and your kind comments on it, John :)
Duncan Avatar
May 24, 2017 at 11:30 PM
Love it, and your trophy win :)
Deschler Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 6:03 PM
Thank you, Debbie. I'm glad you liked it... This older poem is still one of my favorites that I've written so far, and I also think it is still one of the better ones that I've written, too.
Haight Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 9:54 AM
Kelly, congratulations on your Trophy First Place win for this beautiful, deep, well-written poem. Hugs, Sandra
Deschler Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 8:30 PM
Thank you, Sandra! Your kind congrats and comments are much appreciated :)
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August 19, 2016 at 9:29 AM
Congrats on your trophy win,...wonderful write. :) Sunita
Deschler Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 6:24 PM
Thank you for your kind congrats and comments. I appreciate them very much, Sunita :)
Smith Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 8:33 AM
Huge congrats Kelly. I remember this one. So rich with emotion.
Deschler Avatar
September 7, 2016 at 9:30 PM
Thank you so much, Tim. I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem once again :)
Kent Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 7:09 AM
Congrats on the #one win!
Deschler Avatar
September 7, 2016 at 9:09 PM
Thank you so much, Ronald!
Daniel Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 4:51 AM
Great poem, Kelly:) Congratulations on top spot:)
Deschler Avatar
September 1, 2016 at 1:06 PM
Thank you so much, Jo. I appreciate your kind congrats and comments :)
Arnone Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 7:45 PM
Owls are cool: They deliver mail at Hogwarts; they spin their heads like a demon; they can see in the dark and are excellent hunters -- but, they cannot speak at all like a raven! Great poem, Kelly! ;-)
Deschler Avatar
September 1, 2016 at 12:30 PM
Thank you, Tom. Your kind comments are much appreciated... Yes, owls are very cool. They are probably my favorite animal and I've written several poems about them :)
A   Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 4:23 PM
Super congratulations on your awesome win... Linda
Deschler Avatar
August 30, 2016 at 10:03 PM
Thank you for your kind congrats and comments, Linda :)
A  Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 4:17 PM
Kelly, Congrats on your awesome #1 win. It's an honor to have you join my contest. Enjoy my newest blog, "AFTER YOU." Love, Luv SKAT
Deschler Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 7:25 PM
Thank you, Skat. It really is an honor for me to place in one of your contests... I haven't been around much lately. Just needed to take a break from writing for awhile. But, now I'm ready to get back to posting poems and entering contests again.
Allison Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 4:15 PM
Many congrats on your top spot Kelly great rhyme and I like the twist at the end:-) hugs jan xx
Deschler Avatar
August 20, 2016 at 9:19 PM
I'm glad you liked this, Jan. Thanks so much for reading and for your kind congrats... Hugs :)
Negron Flores Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 6:50 AM
Congratulations Kelly.
Deschler Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 8:08 PM
Thank you, Nayda :)
A. Sharma Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 4:13 AM
Brilliant write Kelly .. congrats on fine win!
Deschler Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 10:53 PM
Thank you for your nice comments on this poem, Dr. Upma :)
A  Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 11:43 PM
Kelly, WOW, can't believe you did not score high with this one. , Congratulations on your Poe, Poe WIN! SKAT :)
Deschler Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 10:51 PM
SKAT, thank you for your supportive comments on this poem. I really appreciate them... I was hoping my poem would have scored higher as well. :)
A  Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 5:55 PM
Kelly, Stopping by to enjoy this Favorite poem of mine. .... Always ~SKAT~
Swarthout Avatar
May 12, 2015 at 7:24 AM
Wow this poem is absolutely beautiful I love it!
Deschler Avatar
May 14, 2015 at 10:36 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comments. I'm glad you enjoyed it, Avery!
Dietrich Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 2:47 PM
Revisiting this one, your SECOND best poem at soup. Keep coming up with ones like this!!
Deschler Avatar
May 13, 2015 at 3:33 PM
Thank you, Andrea. This is one of my favorite poems. I recently began collaborating with Liam McDaid and he has brought back that darker edge to my writing. I missed it and will be doing more poems like this one :)
Eastman Avatar
June 17, 2014 at 10:51 AM
Thank you for entering my contest! I enjoyed reading this with all it's imagery. Congratulations on the win. It touched me in it's content.
Deschler Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 5:29 PM
You're welcome, Carol, and thank you for hosting this contest that featured our favorite poems. I'm happy that you enjoyed mine!
A. Sharma Avatar
June 16, 2014 at 5:35 AM
Well penned Kelly ! by the way Owl is my fav bird , i can wink as an owl does,,, has always fascinated me,, so does your poem ,, congrats on ur win !
Deschler Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 12:14 AM
Thank you for the kind congrats and nice comments, Dr. Upma.... Owls are one of my favorite animals, too. I am thinking about hosting a contest with an owl theme, sometime in the future.
Johnson Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 6:50 PM
Congratulations on your win with your favorite poem. Love,Joyce
Deschler Avatar
June 17, 2014 at 10:18 PM
Thank you very much for the kind congrats, Joyce!
Mehta Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 2:12 AM
Thanks for sharing your favorite poem, congrats on the well deserved win, Kelly
Deschler Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 8:31 PM
Thank you for reading my favorite poem, Dr. Ram. I appreciate your nice comments.
A  Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 12:09 AM
Awesome poem Kelly.... Love ~SKAT~
A   Avatar
June 14, 2014 at 10:54 PM
Hi Kelly. Congratulations with your own "Favorite Poem, entered in Carol's XOOL contest... Yeah, we all Win... What a sweet Deal... XOX~ LINDA
Lindley Avatar
June 1, 2014 at 10:46 PM
Love this one my friend!! I love owls and Poe too. BBBBBBravo!!!!!!! Into my fav it goes!!
Deschler Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 2:25 AM
Thank you so much, my friend! It's always nice to know that there are poets out there who are fans of Poe! I really do appreciate the fav, Robert! :)
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