Emilia James Poet Footle

Night Out Pass Out

Shower
Half hour

Teeth clean
No green

Paint nails
Smudge fail

Broke nail
More fail

Cold air
Leg wear

Jeans tight
Won fight

Done in 
Drink gin

Room spin
Less gin

Rave shout
Turn out

Dance moves
Bad grooves

Dance bump
With Trump

Not him 
Was Jim

More drink
Can't think

I cry 
Oh why?

Booze talk 
Can't walk

Night gone
All worn

Go home
With gnome

Feel sick
Move quick

Pass out
Snore pout

Sleep tight 
Night Night
     
         08.09.20

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Simon Hamill October 30, 2020 at 9:35 AM Thats brill.love it. Emilia James October 30, 2020 at 12:19 PM Thank you Simon, this was fun to write, Emilia : )

Gershon Wolf October 8, 2020 at 5:50 PM Ha, ha! 'Oh, what a night!' -- as Frankie Vallee used to warble. Smiles, Gershon Emilia James October 9, 2020 at 2:53 PM Thank you Gershon, like that song and now its playing in my head lol, Emilia : )

John Jones September 24, 2020 at 4:13 PM Love the dance rhythm of this. I can imagine you careening around the dance floor, more Jimmy Rogers than Ginger lol x Emilia James September 25, 2020 at 12:46 PM Thank you John, I do have my moments lol Emilia x

Jan Allison September 24, 2020 at 3:29 AM oh what a fun string of poems once I start i can't stop - am so glad you weren't dancing with the orange ommpah loompah lol:-) hugs jan xx Emilia James September 24, 2020 at 9:50 AM When I get in the right mind frame they just seen to speed out and me too at the ompah...phew! lol. Thank you for reading Jan. Emilia xx : )

Anne-Lise Andresen September 23, 2020 at 6:17 AM - :))) ... thank you ... I love these, Emilia :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Emilia James September 23, 2020 at 9:28 AM Hi Anne- Lise, I'm a fan of these too, they are fun and hope to create more, thank you for reading, Emilia x : )

Tom Cunningham September 20, 2020 at 3:30 AM Love these Emilia, you write one you can't stop, it was a poet on here Brian Strand that created the form. Enjoy your weekend. Tom Emilia James September 20, 2020 at 10:17 AM Thank you Tom, I do like these a lot they are fun. I will look him up thank you for letting me know. Have a good weekend too. Emilia : )

Caren Krutsinger September 17, 2020 at 11:25 AM This was so much fun to read! I have enjoyed it immensely. Emilia James September 17, 2020 at 1:32 PM Thank you Caren, glad you enjoyed it, I find these fun to write. Emila : )

Panagiota Romios September 13, 2020 at 10:52 AM Really enjoyable Emilia! One of the best I ever read. A FAV for this Poet. Hugs from across the pond, Panagiota xx Emilia James September 14, 2020 at 3:08 PM Thank you so much Panagiota, I do enjoy these. Hope you are keeping well. Hugs back from across the pond, Emilia xx