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Night Out Pass Out

Night Out Pass Out

Shower
Half hour

Teeth clean
No green

Paint nails
Smudge fail

Broke nail
More fail

Cold air
Leg wear

Jeans tight
Won fight

Done in 
Drink gin

Room spin
Less gin

Rave shout
Turn out

Dance moves
Bad grooves

Dance bump
With Trump

Not him 
Was Jim

More drink
Cant think

I cry 
Oh why?

Booze talk 
Can't walk

Night gone
All worn

Go home
With gnome

Feel sick
Move quick

Pass out
Snore pout

Sleep tight 
Night Night
     
         08.09.20

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Simon Hamill Date: 10/30/2020 9:35:00 AM Thats brill.love it. Login to Reply Emilia James Date: 10/30/2020 12:19:00 PM Thank you Simon, this was fun to write, Emilia : )

Gershon Wolf Date: 10/8/2020 5:50:00 PM Ha, ha! 'Oh, what a night!' -- as Frankie Vallee used to warble. Smiles, Gershon Login to Reply Emilia James Date: 10/9/2020 2:53:00 PM Thank you Gershon, like that song and now its playing in my head lol, Emilia : )

John Jones Date: 9/24/2020 4:13:00 PM Love the dance rhythm of this. I can imagine you careening around the dance floor, more Jimmy Rogers than Ginger lol x Login to Reply Emilia James Date: 9/25/2020 12:46:00 PM Thank you John, I do have my moments lol Emilia x

Jan Allison Date: 9/24/2020 3:29:00 AM oh what a fun string of poems once I start i can't stop - am so glad you weren't dancing with the orange ommpah loompah lol:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Emilia James Date: 9/24/2020 9:50:00 AM When I get in the right mind frame they just seen to speed out and me too at the ompah...phew! lol. Thank you for reading Jan. Emilia xx : )

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/23/2020 6:17:00 AM - :))) ... thank you ... I love these, Emilia :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Emilia James Date: 9/23/2020 9:28:00 AM Hi Anne- Lise, I'm a fan of these too, they are fun and hope to create more, thank you for reading, Emilia x : )

Tom Cunningham Date: 9/20/2020 3:30:00 AM Love these Emilia, you write one you can't stop, it was a poet on here Brian Strand that created the form. Enjoy your weekend. Tom Login to Reply Emilia James Date: 9/20/2020 10:17:00 AM Thank you Tom, I do like these a lot they are fun. I will look him up thank you for letting me know. Have a good weekend too. Emilia : )

Caren Krutsinger Date: 9/17/2020 11:25:00 AM This was so much fun to read! I have enjoyed it immensely. Login to Reply Emilia James Date: 9/17/2020 1:32:00 PM Thank you Caren, glad you enjoyed it, I find these fun to write. Emila : )

Panagiota Romios Date: 9/13/2020 10:52:00 AM Really enjoyable Emilia! One of the best I ever read. A FAV for this Poet. Hugs from across the pond, Panagiota xx Login to Reply Emilia James Date: 9/14/2020 3:08:00 PM Thank you so much Panagiota, I do enjoy these. Hope you are keeping well. Hugs back from across the pond, Emilia xx