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Night Out Pass Out

Night Out Pass Out Shower Half hour Teeth clean No green Paint nails Smudge fail Broke nail More fail Cold air Leg wear Jeans tight Won fight Done in Drink gin Room spin Less gin Rave shout Turn out Dance moves Bad grooves Dance bump With Trump Not him Was Jim More drink Cant think I cry Oh why? Booze talk Can't walk Night gone All worn Go home With gnome Feel sick Move quick Pass out Snore pout Sleep tight Night Night 08.09.20

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Simon Hamill

Date: 10/30/2020 9:35:00 AM

Thats brill.love it.

Emilia James
Date: 10/30/2020 12:19:00 PM

Thank you Simon, this was fun to write, Emilia : )

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/8/2020 5:50:00 PM

Ha, ha! 'Oh, what a night!' -- as Frankie Vallee used to warble. Smiles, Gershon

Emilia James
Date: 10/9/2020 2:53:00 PM

Thank you Gershon, like that song and now its playing in my head lol, Emilia : )

John Jones

Date: 9/24/2020 4:13:00 PM

Love the dance rhythm of this. I can imagine you careening around the dance floor, more Jimmy Rogers than Ginger lol x

Emilia James
Date: 9/25/2020 12:46:00 PM

Thank you John, I do have my moments lol Emilia x

Jan Allison

Date: 9/24/2020 3:29:00 AM

oh what a fun string of poems once I start i can't stop - am so glad you weren't dancing with the orange ommpah loompah lol:-) hugs jan xx

Emilia James
Date: 9/24/2020 9:50:00 AM

When I get in the right mind frame they just seen to speed out and me too at the ompah...phew! lol. Thank you for reading Jan. Emilia xx : )

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/23/2020 6:17:00 AM

- :))) ... thank you ... I love these, Emilia :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Emilia James
Date: 9/23/2020 9:28:00 AM

Hi Anne- Lise, I'm a fan of these too, they are fun and hope to create more, thank you for reading, Emilia x : )

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/20/2020 3:30:00 AM

Love these Emilia, you write one you can't stop, it was a poet on here Brian Strand that created the form. Enjoy your weekend. Tom

Emilia James
Date: 9/20/2020 10:17:00 AM

Thank you Tom, I do like these a lot they are fun. I will look him up thank you for letting me know. Have a good weekend too. Emilia : )

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/17/2020 11:25:00 AM

This was so much fun to read! I have enjoyed it immensely.

Emilia James
Date: 9/17/2020 1:32:00 PM

Thank you Caren, glad you enjoyed it, I find these fun to write. Emila : )

Panagiota Romios

Date: 9/13/2020 10:52:00 AM

Really enjoyable Emilia! One of the best I ever read. A FAV for this Poet. Hugs from across the pond, Panagiota xx

Emilia James
Date: 9/14/2020 3:08:00 PM

Thank you so much Panagiota, I do enjoy these. Hope you are keeping well. Hugs back from across the pond, Emilia xx