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Ekphrasis based on the artwork “Moonlight in Shadow” by Catrin Weltz-Stein

Canvas Print: Moonlight Shadows by Catrin Welz-Stein

Night of Tranquil Delight

tiny stars
    are pin pricks
in a gray-green 
       gloaming
and we see
     a maiden with
sleek, dark, bobbed hair
      sitting atop
          a lake -
      her billowed 
long burgundy gown
   f  l  o  w  i n  g
    like the swan
attached by a leash
    to the girl’s 
  slender fingers 
its loveliness
reflecting in
             aqua water

the moon
   is a long white sliver
 slicing through
the young maid’s gown
    like an unusually
large parenthesis mark
to the left
        half-caressing her
    in twilight’s 
       enchantment
Oh, bright moon
     of grace -
 glide along with her
   as the white swan
slides besides her
  guiding her
 through this night
    of tranquil
                   delight
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DiMino Avatar
October 3, 2026 at 12:49 PM
This is very beautiful. A perfect physical and spiritual-essence interpretation. Well done!
Empress Avatar
October 3, 2026 at 10:26 AM
Love the opening the most How beautiful is this And that is an extremely gorgeous painting This must be for brians? Im sure a top winner Fave it is Sending you light always sweet andrea
Smith  Avatar
October 3, 2026 at 5:37 AM
A lovely piece of visual ekphrasis: its cascading, carefully spaced lines mirror the gown’s drifting folds, the swan’s glide, and the moonlit water itself. The poem holds a genuine fairytale stillness, while images such as the “long white sliver” of moon and its “unusually / large parenthesis mark” give the scene an especially original, enchanting clarity.
Gibbons Avatar
October 3, 2026 at 2:57 AM
Magnificent write ✍️ dear Andrea flows like a beautiful moonlit dance 🌙✨️❤️‍🔥🧚‍♀️💃💃💃 so descriptive of beautiful art work 🫂 hugzzz friend a fav 4r me have a blessed weekend ❤️‍🩹
Singh Avatar
October 2, 2026 at 10:38 PM
It is a moment of quiet beuty enchantment and inner peace.Like this.
Hind Avatar
October 2, 2026 at 8:19 PM
lovely!!
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