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The mighty dragons which came roaring on that fateful night took great pride in disintegrating everything in their sight Nothing was left that was not scorched by their flame although to the fire-breathing dragons it was all but a game No trees were left standing and nay grasses retained green it took three and a half years for the streets to scrub clean There was no building that wasn't burnt to an absolute crisp The laughing dragons noted down another wondrous trip All the churches did indeed receive three hundred and thirty-three degrees The poor clergymen were seen praying whilst fallen down upon their knees As the puissant dragons kept up their ferocious attack, some pastors were heard screaming for the good lord to come back When the libraries burned down it was such a terrible loss for the town as the most intelligent of the peoples were nowhere to be found Then all the pubs and neon clubs were ravaged and wrecked The fire-breathing dragons just said, "We don't give a feck."

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Date: 9/20/2021 2:01:00 AM
Interesting on more than one level. Does what poem of this sort should - stimulates thought and asks questions of one. It is not just dragons that do not give a feck. Well laid out piece. Regards David in NZ
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Tidy Desk
Date: 9/20/2021 2:44:00 AM
Thank you very much for your feedback David, means a lot, hope you have a great day.
Date: 9/14/2021 7:57:00 AM
These mighty dragons I definitely don't want to mess with, they sound like a hurricane!
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Tidy Desk
Date: 9/21/2021 2:31:00 AM
Robert, thank you very much for your read/comment, hope you catch many more fish, tight lines.
Date: 9/12/2021 4:13:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup enjoy your evening my friend.
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Date: 6/22/2020 4:51:00 PM
lol, I liked this one too. thanks
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Tidy Desk
Date: 4/15/2021 1:26:00 AM
Sorry for the late reply, thank you very much, Mistic rose, I love your poetry, have fav your beautiful prayer, great write.
Date: 5/15/2020 5:17:00 PM
Hello Carl Bellerose, I have enjoyed the tale of the dragon. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/17/2020 12:55:00 PM
Hello Carl Bellerose, oh! I understand. Thnk you for telling me. I hope all is well with you. Enjoy your day.
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Tidy Desk
Date: 5/16/2020 2:50:00 AM
Thanks very much, Darlene De Beaulieu, glad you enjoyed it, have a great day. I had to repost the men of old poem as I deleted it by mistake, that's why your comments are no longer on that poem.
Date: 4/20/2020 5:23:00 PM
HOW THE FECK :) are your poems so unique like this. I encourage you to write more, please for my sake, I love your style.
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Tidy Desk
Date: 4/20/2020 5:43:00 PM
I greatly appreciate your comment, thank you very much. I shall write more, hopefully. Take care.

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