Night of the Headless Horseman

One Halloween night when I was five,
rain pelted city streets, we stayed inside.

Dad lit the Jack-o-lantern candle,
told us the tale of a famous vandal.

One “Headless Horseman” in Sleepy Hollow,
‘twas Ichabod Crane he chose to follow.

Crane ran breathlessly, was terrorized, 
(At this point my father’s eyes looked wild).

Thundering behind him through the forest,
the hooves of a horse and a rider headless.

Carrying a sword to strike Ichabod.
(Dad grabbed a spatula, swung it like a rod).

Not just we children but our mother too,
gasped at the thought of Ichabod pursued.

High winds cut off our electrical power
as in our kitchen three children cowered.

Orange light from the pumpkin’s evil eyes
showed Dad seemed to have dematerialized.

The youngest, I felt something run through my hair, 
I screamed aloud in horror and despair.

The lit pumpkin fell from table to floor, 
darkness as I ran through the kitchen door.

Leaping into bed, pulling up the sheets,
Dad snuck into my room, whispered, “Trick or treat.”

So if you think I am a drama queen, 
please realize that it’s all in my genes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 3/19/2015 11:40:00 PM
Congrats on your winning awesome write dear Carolyn! Trust you r keeping fine these days! God bless!
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Date: 6/12/2014 9:21:00 PM
LOL he was a meanie LOL [nope you are not a drama queen just a queen!] Congrad's on your winning verse. Light & Love
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Date: 6/10/2014 8:05:00 PM
those fun moments are never forgotten, carolyn... a hearty congrats on your win!.. huggs
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Date: 6/10/2014 2:35:00 PM
That's another masterpiece Carolyn ! Very sweet memories excellently penned ! Congrats on ur win !
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Date: 6/10/2014 9:41:00 AM
How funny and charming your story about your dad is Carolyn! Loved it and congrats on your win ! love, Deb
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Date: 6/9/2014 10:59:00 PM
Nicely done. congrats on the win, carolyn
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Date: 6/9/2014 8:50:00 PM
Such memories are treasure worth far more that rubies and gold my friend! Congrats on your win!!!!
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Date: 6/9/2014 7:45:00 PM
It must have been a lot of fun having a daddy like yours. My own daddy was great but older when he married and started a family so we missed his youthful times. Congratulations. Lvoe, Joyce
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Date: 9/21/2012 4:17:00 PM
A charming write so full of good meories and in perfect form too! I MISS YOU!Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 9/20/2012 12:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your Halloween Night contest win Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/20/2012 5:28:00 AM
Oh, this was not only scary but funny too. loved the last two couplets. Well done, congratulations on your win. Lee
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Date: 9/19/2012 1:15:00 PM
Another poem that captures the enchantment of your beloved dad, Carolyn....and his ability to creatively give you a scare! I see where u got your craft!! Congrats on a great scary story in rhyme! luv, gwendolen
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Date: 9/19/2012 6:09:00 AM
Carolyn, I smiled all the way through this wonderful creative drama. It was Wonderful! Mahalo
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Date: 9/19/2012 2:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your smashing scary win Carolyn xx
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Date: 9/18/2012 9:23:00 PM
CONGRATS CAROLYN ON A FABULOUS WRITE AND FIRST PLACE WIN LUV .. HOPE U R RECOVERING NICELY .. SO GREAT TO SEE U HERE AGAIN..
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Date: 11/7/2011 1:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Holiday Poem"contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/5/2011 11:25:00 PM
I grew up in the country (still there) and when we were very young dad would give us a quarter if we'd run around the house in the dark....then he'd give another a quarter to go the opposite way. I know how you felt to be scarred. It's fun to relive and preserve those days in print as you have here! I laughed! RAY
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Date: 11/5/2011 9:01:00 AM
Perhaps this could be entered into the Drama Queen contest too....What a wonderful story, Carolyn!! I think I would scream under the same circumstance!!
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Date: 11/5/2011 8:49:00 AM
Congrats, Carolyn. Excellent write. Nice going. Best to you and yours. luv Ralph
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Date: 9/21/2011 6:48:00 PM
"Drama queen, all in your genes!" ha! Good one. The story of Ichabob Crane was a childhood favorite of mine. Good creative, easy read. I hope you are feeling better. Keep on writing NO MATTER WHAT! I look up to you! *if it means anything. I am barely on here, so my views are waaay down. But you know what? I don't worry. I log on when I can, post what I feel, and read my favorite poets, and occasionally a few others. I will always read your stuff. So keep WRITING!:)
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Date: 9/21/2011 5:06:00 PM
LOL, your dad sounds like he was great fun too! I love this piece, my dear. When I was small, Halloween wasn't celebrated at all over here. Sue wants a devil all-in-one pyjama suit this year, LOL
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