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Night of the Dance

Aime-moi plus que le désir Plied fingers cross flaming lips satin sheets tangle amid long chords moans echo well past our time notes slow but solemnly still tap in key Entranced the night of the dance hunger quenched in moonlit song fires stoked where whispers spoke and tender heartstrings play along Listen, a new day comes alone patterns lain out on her own the bluebird sings of tethered hope from feelings that you've shown Alive, captured now my sun caresses fade the black fill the air with pleasure's pulse with love, there's no turning back

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/26/2017 10:24:00 AM
tingles forming reading your work, Tim .. your poems are alway enjoy able to read ~*
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Date: 8/9/2017 8:29:00 AM
You have been a busy little poet, Tim! Another amazing write and title, bro!
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Date: 8/7/2017 6:50:00 PM
Such a romantic guy you are Tim. Very very beautiful! I love it from beginning to end :)
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Date: 8/7/2017 5:21:00 PM
This is FANTASTIC romantic writing, Tim. Love it!
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Date: 8/7/2017 4:37:00 PM
aww so lovely to see the romance back in your poem Tim:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/7/2017 4:01:00 PM
"The air with pleasure's pulse" beautiful Tim...
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Date: 8/7/2017 12:38:00 PM
Well done Tim. I like the line the bluebird sings of tethered hope. :)
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Date: 8/7/2017 10:47:00 AM
Love me more than.... that is so beautiful Tim
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Date: 8/7/2017 10:46:00 AM
The sun hasn't escaped you this time, and neither has this amorous poem, Tim.
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Date: 8/7/2017 9:52:00 AM
Love is so powerful--good theme.
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Date: 8/7/2017 7:46:00 AM
the poem made me think of passion that can not be stopped
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