Night of the Ball

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Music echoes through the halls,
climbing stairs, and gilded walls.
Our lovely lass discreetly swoons. 
With longing eyes, she scans the room.

Young ladies dressed, in gowns, divine,
are coifed, and rouged and powdered fine.
Their dancing partners, starched, refined,
drink them in like precious wine.

A rhythm, now, she can't define,
has moved her toes in quarter time.
With her laced up shoes, she taps the floor
to violins, plucked strings, and chords

This debutant, is a lonely child
who spent her days by the river side.
Ann is a budding rose among the wild.
in a ballroom filled with bright bouquets 
of hopeful, blooms, in vast array.
There is giggled laughter, beguiling grins,
and we hear the Danube waltz, play again.

Politely, polished, bright young men
gather flowers, twirling them
until their skirts sail with the wind.

She blushes, rouged, with charm, beguiling,
and hopes for partners, dashing, smiling.
She flutters a fan to cool her face
and closes eyes, a song embraced.

She sits awhile, with private dreams
She keeps her secret dream alive
Abides her time, and thinks it seems
a fantasy, she has contrived.

But then, she feels his gentle tap
He stands before her very eyes
and takes her hand, now from her lap

Deep in her magic dreamer's trance 
Ann wakes, to look upon the prince
Who glides away with her upon
The ballroom floor, ......where they are one,
until the strike of midnight comes

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Fairytale Contest: Sponsor Alexis Y

Hometown: Riverside
Middle name: Ann

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 10/13/2018 9:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your fairytale win, Carrie. I see this is my second visit :)
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Date: 10/8/2018 7:16:00 PM
Hi Carrie, Thanks for entering this oldie but goodie into my fairy tale contest. I found it to be dreamy , romantic and magical. I enjoyed the read. Congratulations on your 2nd place win. PS, I apologize for taking so long to judge the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/26/2014 9:34:00 PM
WOW, THIS WAS THE BEST IN MY BOOK,, ANYWAYS... CARRIE, A beautiful and wonderful Ballroom Delight. Congrats on your win :) Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/16/2014 10:38:00 PM
A dreamy and magical Carrie, enjoyed your enchanting and magical ballroom dance. Big congrats on a great write and win! Hugs
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Date: 12/16/2014 8:38:00 PM
Hi Carrie, just read your ballroom poem, and it is so lovely. Your words are so magical and dreamy as you describe Miss Emily at at the ball. (My 19 year old granddaughter's name is Emily, so I pictured her dancing away in your poem!) Congratulations on your nice win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/16/2014 4:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your win,Carrie, beautiful poem. Bless you
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Date: 12/16/2014 2:19:00 PM
congratulations on your fine win Carrie, well done
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Date: 12/16/2014 1:43:00 PM
I love how you named Miss Emily. I love that name. You brought her to life in this beautiful poem Carrie. Congratulations on your win, I love that she got her prince in the end.
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Date: 12/16/2014 1:03:00 PM
A great work Carrie,congrats on the win...huggs
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Date: 12/16/2014 11:53:00 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Carrie:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/1/2014 1:54:00 AM
Beautifully written, the best of luck in the contest. -Raul
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Date: 12/1/2014 1:10:00 AM
Simply divine! good luck Carrie! Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/30/2014 8:58:00 PM
I love reading these to my girls. All the best.
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