Night Muse

Tonight I call
a certain woman
who spreads her scent
of fragrant dianthus
into my night
so silently...

The way she
speaks my name
almost mocking me
making gentle fun...

Because of her
modest style of love
I look to her
my evening star
behind orange clouds
over ocean horizon...

She possesses
the highest summit
of my heart
she the poetess
the moon goddess
transfiguring kaleidoscope
in sunset towards the west...

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 8/29/2013 10:37:00 PM

very nicely done Ken. I have one called kaleidoscope,,,, thank you for reading my Dawn ;}

Ken Carroll
Date: 8/29/2013 10:42:00 PM

Hi Debbie, Thanks for visiting tonight...I'll take a look at your "kaleidoscope" ken

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 8/29/2013 2:51:00 AM

TONIGHT MY OLD PAL YOU ARE ONE WITH A GODDESS BEAUTIFUL PIECE

Ken Carroll
Date: 8/29/2013 2:55:00 AM

Hi Liam, Thanks for visiting and good to see you over here my friend.. Ken

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/28/2013 9:50:00 AM

Kenneth, a lovely sky to look upon... hope you are having a lovely morning... I'm happy to know this poetess, has captured your muse and tide.. Sometimes we all need a little something extra special in our lives.. It helps motivate many moods... hugs... Linda

Ken Carroll
Date: 8/28/2013 10:47:00 AM

Hola Linda, Thank you Paloma for the beautiful comment and for understanding the hidden meaning in this write.. Besos y abrazos, Ken..