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Night In Your Eyes

Dark nights in your eyes Twist hair to the flaming breaths Oh! I can't stop kissing you. katauta poem. half poem half of sedoka

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Date: 11/16/2019 5:25:00 AM
Ooh nice! I like this. Would love to see a longer version.
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Esha Sharan
Date: 11/17/2019 12:20:00 AM
SO SWEET... Thank You, Aurora. the next half of the poem is waiting for a little spice. ha..(wink)
Date: 11/16/2019 4:43:00 AM
Nice... we all need a love like this..
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Esha Sharan
Date: 11/17/2019 12:21:00 AM
Of course... something simply great. thanks for reading.

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