Night In Autumn

Gentle is how I want to be fed today
amidst the resplendent gold of autumn's night;
and in this wide-scope that moves ever calmly
zigzagging from left to right, 
a thousand stars encircle my senses 
that windows of my mind glitter
unto reveries of love's colored fervor.


Contest: One Autumn Night (in just 7 lines): 
Sponsor: PD A
Date: 6 Sep 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Onclaud Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 12:53 AM
wow, you really brightened autumn with your lovely piece.. many congrats, ashley
Dietrich Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 12:17 AM
beautiful the way you had the thousand stars appear in this one. Congrats for your win.
Allison Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 1:10 PM
a beautiful write - many congrats:-) hugs jan x
A   Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 10:06 AM
ASHLEY, it's an honor having your poem on my winning list. Congratulations on your win in my Autumn Night's contest. A blessing it is to be back. I love nothing more than a free feeling of falling leaves drifting away at night. Thank you for the supporting one of my many soup contest. Stop by my latest blog "Together Alone" if you'd like. No problem if you don't have time. Just take this time and enjoy your win... LOVE LINDA
Andresen Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 2:50 PM
- A beautiful poem, Ashley ! - Why .... no comments on this beautiful poem - I am happy for I found this little gem ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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