Valsa George Poet Footle

Night Footles

 Sun set
behind

Shadows
stretched long

Night came
Bats screeched

Clouds drift
Moon smiles

Wind blows
Trees shake

Leaves drop
They dance

nose dive
fall down

rest limp
in mud

Snakes curl
in holes

Fog comes
veils night

Earth sleeps
quiet
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May.27.2022

Placed Fourth

A Brian Strand Premiere Choice Poetry Contest 

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Sam Kauffman May 28, 2022 at 5:42 PM Valsa, your words always capture the scene and the feeling around that scene. Beautifully done. Congratulations on your win! Blessings!

Demetrios Trifiatis May 28, 2022 at 3:42 AM Choreography of striking footles, dearest Vasle. Blessings!

Supraja Kannan May 27, 2022 at 9:44 PM Wow... That's so perfect... Beautifully done,Valsa... Enjoyed reading this cute footles...

Gershon Wolf May 27, 2022 at 3:03 PM Congrats on your win in the contest, Valsa!

Rico Leffanta May 27, 2022 at 11:22 AM Enjoyed, but wish more people would have pleasant dreams! Aloha!

Victor Buhagiar May 27, 2022 at 9:31 AM I see you got placed on your footle. Well done.

Andrea Dietrich May 27, 2022 at 8:43 AM oh and I see it's a winner on his list. big Congrats

Andrea Dietrich May 27, 2022 at 8:42 AM I love the nightfall imagery, Valsa.

Bill Baker May 27, 2022 at 8:31 AM Good entry for the contest, Valsa. I enjoyed reading your Footles. Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill

Vijay Pandit May 27, 2022 at 4:39 AM Great night images in every pair. No doubt a win Brian's contest.

Tom Cunningham May 27, 2022 at 2:02 AM I see you've caught the footles bug Valsa, once you start you can't stop. Best of luck in the contest and enjoy your weekend. Tom