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Sun set behind Shadows stretched long Night came Bats screeched Clouds drift Moon smiles Wind blows Trees shake Leaves drop They dance nose dive fall down rest limp in mud Snakes curl in holes Fog comes veils night Earth sleeps quiet ___________ May.27.2022 Placed Fourth A Brian Strand Premiere Choice Poetry Contest

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Date: 5/28/2022 5:42:00 PM
Valsa, your words always capture the scene and the feeling around that scene. Beautifully done. Congratulations on your win! Blessings!
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Date: 5/28/2022 3:42:00 AM
Choreography of striking footles, dearest Vasle. Blessings!
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Date: 5/27/2022 9:44:00 PM
Wow... That's so perfect... Beautifully done,Valsa... Enjoyed reading this cute footles...
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Date: 5/27/2022 3:03:00 PM
Congrats on your win in the contest, Valsa!
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Date: 5/27/2022 11:22:00 AM
Enjoyed, but wish more people would have pleasant dreams! Aloha!
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Date: 5/27/2022 9:31:00 AM
I see you got placed on your footle. Well done.
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Date: 5/27/2022 8:43:00 AM
oh and I see it's a winner on his list. big Congrats
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Date: 5/27/2022 8:42:00 AM
I love the nightfall imagery, Valsa.
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Date: 5/27/2022 8:31:00 AM
Good entry for the contest, Valsa. I enjoyed reading your Footles. Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill
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Date: 5/27/2022 4:39:00 AM
Great night images in every pair. No doubt a win Brian's contest.
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Date: 5/27/2022 2:02:00 AM
I see you've caught the footles bug Valsa, once you start you can't stop. Best of luck in the contest and enjoy your weekend. Tom
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