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     Such golden galaxies of heavens light
     Treasured footnotes kept unto my care
     Hope's silhouettes that shine each night
     But that by God's Grace did let us share

     We danced through each gilded beams caress
     Away to such distance we'd dare not guess
     Entwined in arms our hearts closely pressed
     From pleasured love that sought nothing less

     With each full moon's glow I'm carried back
     To one nights life lest be swept by time
     So sure this hearts echo will never lack
     No truer passion found from any rhyme

     Memories gathered from beams of light
     Shall prevail forever with loves sight


     12/14/2016

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Date: 12/23/2016 11:00:00 AM
Truly a well crafted and classic sonnet, so beautifully rhymed and image filled my friend! Sure wish I had written this gem.. A fav....
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Date: 12/23/2016 11:06:00 AM
Thank you Robert...
Date: 12/21/2016 8:00:00 PM
Always a joy to view your work, Charlie. Just lovely! ...Fran
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Date: 12/22/2016 1:54:00 PM
Thank you Fran...
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Date: 12/22/2016 12:54:00 PM
Thank you Fran...
Date: 12/20/2016 1:31:00 PM
This is a gorgeous, warm and passionate filled sonnet, Charlie. It's beauty is depth that touches me as a woman and poet. I absolutely love this poem and I'm impressed ... CayCay
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Date: 12/20/2016 4:05:00 PM
I am so grateful for your kindness CayCay, thank you...
Date: 12/20/2016 1:43:00 AM
Amazing love captured in your beautiful sonnet, Charlie:) well done:)
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Date: 12/20/2016 6:46:00 AM
Thank you Jo...
Date: 12/19/2016 11:46:00 PM
YES< Charlie you have captured the essence of love!! Nostalgic wonder of a poem.
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Date: 12/20/2016 6:45:00 AM
Thank you Andrea...
Date: 12/16/2016 3:19:00 PM
Some memories, especially romantic ones, will never be lost in darkness, Charlie! A most delightful sonnet. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 12/19/2016 11:17:00 AM
Thank you Paul...
Date: 12/16/2016 9:18:00 AM
Beautiful flowers of emotion ... a joyous read ...
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Date: 12/16/2016 12:05:00 PM
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Date: 12/16/2016 6:01:00 AM
This is a gilded piece of art. Expresses such wonderful emotions. A 7
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Date: 12/16/2016 12:04:00 PM
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Date: 12/15/2016 8:44:00 PM
A classic sonnet, so beautiful and well written!
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Date: 12/15/2016 10:35:00 PM
I. Take great pride and pleasure whenever you read my work ARTHUR. I don' t think you'd waste the time on something lacking your attention. Thank you again...
Date: 12/15/2016 7:10:00 AM
Stunning reminisces Charlie, a wondrous sonnet.
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Date: 12/15/2016 10:42:00 PM
I rather consider your work holding the more stunning mantle, Paloma, mine a bit more workman like. But from your sincerity I take great pride. . Thank you so much...
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Date: 12/15/2016 10:29:00 PM
I rather consider your work holding the more stunning mantle, Paloma, mine a bit more workman like. But from your sincerity I take great pride. . Thank you so much...
Date: 12/14/2016 3:52:00 PM
Very nice, Charlie, you chose the picture I would choose if I were to do this contest. we are moon lover romantics
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Date: 12/14/2016 4:12:00 PM
I don't believe I had a choice...That was the only one that spoke to me. Thanks Andrea.
Date: 12/14/2016 2:39:00 PM
Yes your head is in a good place xx Great poem x
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Date: 12/14/2016 3:36:00 PM
Thank you Ms. Wendy...
Date: 12/14/2016 2:05:00 PM
- A beautiful poem, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/14/2016 3:32:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise...
Date: 12/14/2016 11:37:00 AM
Lovely emotions skilfully expressed in an impressive Sonnet ... The ending has been superb ...
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Date: 12/14/2016 11:47:00 AM
Thank you Probir...
Date: 12/14/2016 11:26:00 AM
Hi Charlie, What a beautiful and romantic Sonette. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/14/2016 11:46:00 AM
Thank you Alexis...
Date: 12/14/2016 11:02:00 AM
Stunningly romantic! Super 7
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Date: 12/14/2016 11:46:00 AM
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Date: 12/14/2016 10:44:00 AM
A beautiful sonnet, Charlie:) Good luck my friend.
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Date: 12/14/2016 11:45:00 AM
So gently inspired by The Sonnet King....
Date: 12/14/2016 10:06:00 AM
This was absolutely beautiful Charlie. Such a soft and loving poem you have penned. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 12/14/2016 11:44:00 AM
Thank you Chris...