Charlie Smith Poet Sonnet

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Night Fantasies

Such golden galaxies of heavens light
     Treasured footnotes kept unto my care
     Hope's silhouettes that shine each night
     But that by God's Grace did let us share

     We danced through each gilded beams caress
     Away to such distance we'd dare not guess
     Entwined in arms our hearts closely pressed
     From pleasured love that sought nothing less

     With each full moon's glow I'm carried back
     To one nights life lest be swept by time
     So sure this hearts echo will never lack
     No truer passion found from any rhyme

     Memories gathered from beams of light
     Shall prevail forever with loves sight


     12/14/2016

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Robert Lindley December 23, 2016 at 11:00 AM Truly a well crafted and classic sonnet, so beautifully rhymed and image filled my friend! Sure wish I had written this gem.. A fav.... Charlie Smith December 23, 2016 at 11:06 AM Thank you Robert...

Francis J Grasso December 21, 2016 at 8:00 PM Always a joy to view your work, Charlie. Just lovely! ...Fran Charlie Smith December 22, 2016 at 1:54 PM Thank you Fran... Charlie Smith December 22, 2016 at 12:54 PM Thank you Fran...

CayCay Godwin December 20, 2016 at 1:31 PM This is a gorgeous, warm and passionate filled sonnet, Charlie. It's beauty is depth that touches me as a woman and poet. I absolutely love this poem and I'm impressed ... CayCay Charlie Smith December 20, 2016 at 4:05 PM I am so grateful for your kindness CayCay, thank you...

Joanna Daniel December 20, 2016 at 1:43 AM Amazing love captured in your beautiful sonnet, Charlie:) well done:) Charlie Smith December 20, 2016 at 6:46 AM Thank you Jo...

Andrea Dietrich December 19, 2016 at 11:46 PM YES< Charlie you have captured the essence of love!! Nostalgic wonder of a poem. Charlie Smith December 20, 2016 at 6:45 AM Thank you Andrea...

Paul Callus December 16, 2016 at 3:19 PM Some memories, especially romantic ones, will never be lost in darkness, Charlie! A most delightful sonnet. ~ Regards // paul Charlie Smith December 19, 2016 at 11:17 AM Thank you Paul...

Probir Gupta December 16, 2016 at 9:18 AM Beautiful flowers of emotion ... a joyous read ... Charlie Smith December 16, 2016 at 12:05 PM Thank you Probir...

Afzal Nusker December 16, 2016 at 6:01 AM This is a gilded piece of art. Expresses such wonderful emotions. A 7 Charlie Smith December 16, 2016 at 12:04 PM Thank you Afzal...

Arthur Vaso December 15, 2016 at 8:44 PM A classic sonnet, so beautiful and well written! Charlie Smith December 15, 2016 at 10:35 PM I. Take great pride and pleasure whenever you read my work ARTHUR. I don' t think you'd waste the time on something lacking your attention. Thank you again...

Paloma P December 15, 2016 at 7:10 AM Stunning reminisces Charlie, a wondrous sonnet. Charlie Smith December 15, 2016 at 10:42 PM I rather consider your work holding the more stunning mantle, Paloma, mine a bit more workman like. But from your sincerity I take great pride. . Thank you so much... Charlie Smith December 15, 2016 at 10:29 PM I rather consider your work holding the more stunning mantle, Paloma, mine a bit more workman like. But from your sincerity I take great pride. . Thank you so much...

Andrea Dietrich December 14, 2016 at 3:52 PM Very nice, Charlie, you chose the picture I would choose if I were to do this contest. we are moon lover romantics Charlie Smith December 14, 2016 at 4:12 PM I don't believe I had a choice...That was the only one that spoke to me. Thanks Andrea.

Wendy Rycroft December 14, 2016 at 2:39 PM Yes your head is in a good place xx Great poem x Charlie Smith December 14, 2016 at 3:36 PM Thank you Ms. Wendy...

Anne-Lise Andresen December 14, 2016 at 2:05 PM - A beautiful poem, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Charlie Smith December 14, 2016 at 3:32 PM Thanks Anne-Lise...

Probir Gupta December 14, 2016 at 11:37 AM Lovely emotions skilfully expressed in an impressive Sonnet ... The ending has been superb ... Charlie Smith December 14, 2016 at 11:47 AM Thank you Probir...

Alexis Y. December 14, 2016 at 11:26 AM Hi Charlie, What a beautiful and romantic Sonette. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis Charlie Smith December 14, 2016 at 11:46 AM Thank you Alexis...

Just James December 14, 2016 at 11:02 AM Stunningly romantic! Super 7 Charlie Smith December 14, 2016 at 11:46 AM Thank you James...

Chris Green December 14, 2016 at 10:06 AM This was absolutely beautiful Charlie. Such a soft and loving poem you have penned. Good luck in the contest. Charlie Smith December 14, 2016 at 11:44 AM Thank you Chris...