Andrea Dietrich Poet Rhyme

Night Dread-Word Morph

Night comes and he is filled with fright

because eight evenings in a row, great dread

he's had to fight while in his bed.

He lies now waiting for the morning light.


March 11, 2019  for Jesse Rowe's "Word Morph Poem" Contest

Hope I did it right!

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Kim Rodrigues March 26, 2019 at 8:56 PM Congrats on your win, Andrea!

Line Gauthier March 24, 2019 at 7:39 AM You did it right, Andrea! LOL Congrats on your win.

Sheri Fresonke Harper March 15, 2019 at 4:44 PM lol, it looks right, I had to redo mine several times, it is a fun, somewhat scary read, Andrea, enjoyed it

CayCay Godwin March 14, 2019 at 9:27 AM I'm thinking, yes - you did write it right. 'ight' was a good pick. Oh, you - you threw in 'right' to match the other lines, didn't you? Color me slow, but big time grinning! Love, CayCay Andrea Dietrich March 14, 2019 at 3:48 PM Ha, the "right" thing was totally unintentional!! but it makes me look clever! someone said something about the word "right" down below and I did not know what he was talking about until you just said this to me.

Joseph May March 13, 2019 at 6:39 PM This looks interesting Andrea..looks good to me...Nicely done..Winning wishes

Kim Rodrigues March 12, 2019 at 7:54 PM I haven't checked this contest out yet but it sounds great to me :)

Janice Canerdy March 12, 2019 at 7:46 PM Well-done, Andrea! Janice

Constance La France March 12, 2019 at 7:40 PM Andrea, I like this, I had absolutely no idea what to do, so I did nothing, I want to enjoy writing not get a headache ~ Andrea Dietrich March 14, 2019 at 3:49 PM Dear heart, use the link he provided. That makes it fairly easy.

Bette Bavington March 12, 2019 at 9:27 AM Good one. Flows nicely. Short sweet and right to the point.

Caren Krutsinger March 12, 2019 at 6:00 AM I think it is more than right, I did not even recognize it as a morph poem, it flows nicely, Andrea.

Tom Cunningham March 12, 2019 at 4:16 AM The dreaded night fears. Well done Andrea, good luck. Tom

M. L. Kiser March 12, 2019 at 1:26 AM Well done! Good luck with the contest.

Joseph P. DiMino March 11, 2019 at 9:06 PM I dread the night for lack of light...and fear the day, for no place to hide. Very well penned! Short but packed with avenues of speculation. I love poetry that doesn't so much as say but opens doors and windows to let imagination in. Great read!

Richard D Seal March 11, 2019 at 6:49 PM I like how you morphed into ‘right’ at the end lol. Take care, Richard