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Magical moonbeams Sparkling like silver On an inky sea I watch them dancing Captivatingly Bright mystic moon Shining each night Waxes and wanes Controlling tides Silver orb Shines above constantly I love A clear Night Contest diminished hexaverse Sponsored by Charles Messina 1/21/19

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Line Gauthier

Date: 2/18/2019 7:44:00 AM

Beautiful, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/19/2019 7:33:00 AM

Thanks Line:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 2/15/2019 3:08:00 PM

Captivating imagery, Jan. Belated congratulations. Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 2/17/2019 12:24:00 PM

thanks so much Paul:-) hugs Jan xx

Charlie Knowlton

Date: 2/14/2019 2:03:00 PM

I like this poem very much Jan. Such good imagery. No need for the pic. Your poem describes it perfectly.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/14/2019 3:25:00 PM

thanks so much Charlie:-) hugs Jan xx

Stephen Pennell

Date: 2/3/2019 5:40:00 AM

this must have won great imaginary

Jan Allison
Date: 2/3/2019 5:45:00 AM

Thanks Stephen:-) hugs Jan x

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/1/2019 5:49:00 PM

Hello D.M. this is a lovely photo of the a moon setting into the water. Well it looks like it is setting into the water. Have a nice evening my friend.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/2/2019 5:31:00 AM

Thanks so much Darlene:-) hugs Jan xx

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 2/1/2019 9:37:00 AM

A painter could paint a picture from your words only. Congratulations!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/2/2019 5:31:00 AM

Thanks so much Sunlite:-) hugs Jan xx

Valerie Staton

Date: 2/1/2019 5:53:00 AM

Very picturesque!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/1/2019 7:04:00 PM

thanks Valerie:-) hugs Jan xx

Old Buck

Date: 1/31/2019 3:26:00 PM

Another great Jan Allison work. Thanks for sharing them all, with all of us on the soup. oldbuck

Jan Allison
Date: 2/1/2019 3:03:00 AM

thanks so much OldBuck:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 1/30/2019 11:05:00 AM

This is beautiful, Jan I see that clear night. Congrats on your big win!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/1/2019 3:03:00 AM

thanks Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx

Beata Agustin

Date: 1/28/2019 12:04:00 AM

Congrats! Thanks for sharing your talent. God bless you!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/1/2019 3:02:00 AM

thanks Beata:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 1/27/2019 8:03:00 PM

Beautiful write Jan..Congrats on your win..

Jan Allison
Date: 2/1/2019 3:02:00 AM

thanks Jospeh:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/27/2019 3:18:00 PM

I just knew this one would do well!Big congrats, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/1/2019 3:02:00 AM

thanks Andrea makes a change from my normal poop lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/27/2019 9:20:00 AM

Hi Jan, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 2/1/2019 3:01:00 AM

thanks Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

Warren Doll

Date: 1/27/2019 8:53:00 AM

Jan, back to congratulate you on your 1st place win. Warmest Wishes~ Warren

Jan Allison
Date: 2/1/2019 3:01:00 AM

thanks warren:-) hugs Jan xx

Charles Messina

Date: 1/27/2019 8:21:00 AM

I too love a clear night, and I too love this poem, Jan. Great imagery and beautifully written! Congratulations on your 1st place win! Hugs // Charlie xx

Jan Allison
Date: 2/1/2019 3:01:00 AM

thanks for the contest prompt I have seldom written this form:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/26/2019 9:22:00 PM

Everything about this is wonderful, Jan! Beautiful imagery, lyrical lines, precise adherence to the form. Really, really, like it! :) gw

Jan Allison
Date: 2/1/2019 3:00:00 AM

thanks my friend:-) hugs Jan xx

Warren Doll

Date: 1/25/2019 11:23:00 AM

Brilliant poem and beautiful photograph. Jan. Warmest wishes~ Warren

Jan Allison
Date: 2/1/2019 2:59:00 AM

thanks Warren:-) hugs Jan xx

Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/23/2019 4:03:00 AM

Hi Jan, this is such an excellent write. This one reads so well, such beautiful imagery your words display on your canvas. Such a dreamy light. I do so enjoy looking upon moon and your words brought the moon to my vision so easily Jan. This reads like a winner to me. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Jan Allison
Date: 2/1/2019 2:58:00 AM

thanks Mike:-) hugs Jan xx

Pat Adams

Date: 1/22/2019 5:06:00 PM

Excellent example of the form. Very descriptive. We have a hot tub on our deck and love a clear night for the moon and stars (and Bud Copper).....Well done. No luck needed here to place!..........A FAV for me....pat

Jan Allison
Date: 2/1/2019 2:57:00 AM

thanks Pat interesting new avatar lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/22/2019 8:52:00 AM

WoW! Jan, You did an excellent job with this form! I enjoy watching the moon on a lovely night and I enjoyed this poem. I think you've penned yourself into the winners circle. Well done:-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 2/1/2019 2:57:00 AM

Thanks Alexis we often go for moonlight midnight walks:-) hugs Jan xx

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/21/2019 5:44:00 PM

Hello Han, i love the clear sky, to see the stars and the full moon shine. Have a nice evening my friend.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/28/2019 8:26:00 AM

I love a clear moonlight night too:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/21/2019 5:08:00 PM

You did really well with this challenge, my friend. Your poem is so pretty.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/28/2019 8:25:00 AM

Thanks so much Andrea I loved the challenge:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 1/21/2019 11:55:00 AM

Well done! Too bad you weren't here last night to watch the Full Moon eclipse! Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison
Date: 1/21/2019 2:50:00 PM

I've seen pics on the web Rico I was tucked up in bed when the eclipse happened:-) hugs Jan xx

Caycay Jennings

Date: 1/21/2019 9:48:00 AM

Superb, I truly love this. FAV. that leaves me with naught of more import to say other than, WOW, Jan. Love and thoughts ... CayCay

Jan Allison
Date: 1/21/2019 9:57:00 AM

Thanks so much for the comment and fave:-) Hugs Jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/21/2019 9:05:00 AM

How splendidly you describe that awesome photo of the moon on the ocean, Jan. And the sea IS ever changing, ebbing and flowing through our lives. What can beat a clear night on the ocean or beach? The farther offshore you go, the more amazing are the images you describe so beautifully, Jan. Best wishes in the contest -- form looks perfect to me, but you left the contest name and sponsor off the bottom. Don't know if it's required. Sending winning wishes your way! Love, carolyn

Jan Allison
Date: 1/21/2019 9:37:00 AM

Ooh thanks for the heads up I will put the contest details on, I really enjoyed the challenge, I love walking near the sea ion the promenade in the moonlight:-) hugs Jan xx