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Night Dh

Magical moonbeams
Sparkling like silver
On an inky sea
I watch them dancing
Captivatingly

 
Bright mystic moon
Shining each night
Waxes and wanes
Controlling tides

Silver orb
Shines above
constantly

I love
A clear

Night

Contest diminished hexaverse
Sponsored by Charles Messina

1/21/19

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Line Gauthier Date: 2/18/2019 7:44:00 AM Beautiful, Jan. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/19/2019 7:33:00 AM Thanks Line:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus Date: 2/15/2019 3:08:00 PM Captivating imagery, Jan. Belated congratulations. Hugs // paul Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/17/2019 12:24:00 PM thanks so much Paul:-) hugs Jan xx

Charlie Knowlton Date: 2/14/2019 2:03:00 PM I like this poem very much Jan. Such good imagery. No need for the pic. Your poem describes it perfectly. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/14/2019 3:25:00 PM thanks so much Charlie:-) hugs Jan xx

Stephen Pennell Date: 2/3/2019 5:40:00 AM this must have won great imaginary Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/3/2019 5:45:00 AM Thanks Stephen:-) hugs Jan x

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 2/1/2019 5:49:00 PM Hello D.M. this is a lovely photo of the a moon setting into the water. Well it looks like it is setting into the water. Have a nice evening my friend. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/2/2019 5:31:00 AM Thanks so much Darlene:-) hugs Jan xx

Sunlite Wanter Date: 2/1/2019 9:37:00 AM A painter could paint a picture from your words only. Congratulations! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/2/2019 5:31:00 AM Thanks so much Sunlite:-) hugs Jan xx

Valerie Staton Date: 2/1/2019 5:53:00 AM Very picturesque! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/1/2019 7:04:00 PM thanks Valerie:-) hugs Jan xx

Old Buck Date: 1/31/2019 3:26:00 PM Another great Jan Allison work. Thanks for sharing them all, with all of us on the soup. oldbuck Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/1/2019 3:03:00 AM thanks so much OldBuck:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra L. Weiss Date: 1/30/2019 11:05:00 AM This is beautiful, Jan I see that clear night. Congrats on your big win! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/1/2019 3:03:00 AM thanks Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx

Beata Agustin Date: 1/28/2019 12:04:00 AM Congrats! Thanks for sharing your talent. God bless you! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/1/2019 3:02:00 AM thanks Beata:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May Date: 1/27/2019 8:03:00 PM Beautiful write Jan..Congrats on your win.. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/1/2019 3:02:00 AM thanks Jospeh:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/27/2019 3:18:00 PM I just knew this one would do well!Big congrats, Jan. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/1/2019 3:02:00 AM thanks Andrea makes a change from my normal poop lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y. Date: 1/27/2019 9:20:00 AM Hi Jan, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/1/2019 3:01:00 AM thanks Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

Warren Doll Date: 1/27/2019 8:53:00 AM Jan, back to congratulate you on your 1st place win. Warmest Wishes~ Warren Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/1/2019 3:01:00 AM thanks warren:-) hugs Jan xx

Charles Messina Date: 1/27/2019 8:21:00 AM I too love a clear night, and I too love this poem, Jan. Great imagery and beautifully written! Congratulations on your 1st place win! Hugs // Charlie xx Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/1/2019 3:01:00 AM thanks for the contest prompt I have seldom written this form:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf Date: 1/26/2019 9:22:00 PM Everything about this is wonderful, Jan! Beautiful imagery, lyrical lines, precise adherence to the form. Really, really, like it! :) gw Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/1/2019 3:00:00 AM thanks my friend:-) hugs Jan xx

Warren Doll Date: 1/25/2019 11:23:00 AM Brilliant poem and beautiful photograph. Jan. Warmest wishes~ Warren Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/1/2019 2:59:00 AM thanks Warren:-) hugs Jan xx

Vladislav Raven Date: 1/23/2019 4:03:00 AM Hi Jan, this is such an excellent write. This one reads so well, such beautiful imagery your words display on your canvas. Such a dreamy light. I do so enjoy looking upon moon and your words brought the moon to my vision so easily Jan. This reads like a winner to me. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Hugs....Mike. XX Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/1/2019 2:58:00 AM thanks Mike:-) hugs Jan xx

Pat Adams Date: 1/22/2019 5:06:00 PM Excellent example of the form. Very descriptive. We have a hot tub on our deck and love a clear night for the moon and stars (and Bud Copper).....Well done. No luck needed here to place!..........A FAV for me....pat Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/1/2019 2:57:00 AM thanks Pat interesting new avatar lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y. Date: 1/22/2019 8:52:00 AM WoW! Jan, You did an excellent job with this form! I enjoy watching the moon on a lovely night and I enjoyed this poem. I think you've penned yourself into the winners circle. Well done:-) Alexis Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/1/2019 2:57:00 AM Thanks Alexis we often go for moonlight midnight walks:-) hugs Jan xx

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 1/21/2019 5:44:00 PM Hello Han, i love the clear sky, to see the stars and the full moon shine. Have a nice evening my friend. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/28/2019 8:26:00 AM I love a clear moonlight night too:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/21/2019 5:08:00 PM You did really well with this challenge, my friend. Your poem is so pretty. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/28/2019 8:25:00 AM Thanks so much Andrea I loved the challenge:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta Date: 1/21/2019 11:55:00 AM Well done! Too bad you weren't here last night to watch the Full Moon eclipse! Aloha! Rico Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/21/2019 2:50:00 PM I've seen pics on the web Rico I was tucked up in bed when the eclipse happened:-) hugs Jan xx

CayCay Jennings Date: 1/21/2019 9:48:00 AM Superb, I truly love this. FAV. that leaves me with naught of more import to say other than, WOW, Jan. Love and thoughts ... CayCay Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/21/2019 9:57:00 AM Thanks so much for the comment and fave:-) Hugs Jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 1/21/2019 9:05:00 AM How splendidly you describe that awesome photo of the moon on the ocean, Jan. And the sea IS ever changing, ebbing and flowing through our lives. What can beat a clear night on the ocean or beach? The farther offshore you go, the more amazing are the images you describe so beautifully, Jan. Best wishes in the contest -- form looks perfect to me, but you left the contest name and sponsor off the bottom. Don't know if it's required. Sending winning wishes your way! Love, carolyn Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/21/2019 9:37:00 AM Ooh thanks for the heads up I will put the contest details on, I really enjoyed the challenge, I love walking near the sea ion the promenade in the moonlight:-) hugs Jan xx

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