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Magical moonbeams Sparkling like silver On an inky sea I watch them dancing Captivatingly Bright mystic moon Shining each night Waxes and wanes Controlling tides Silver orb Shines above constantly I love A clear Night Contest diminished hexaverse Sponsored by Charles Messina 1/21/19

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Date: 2/18/2019 7:44:00 AM
Beautiful, Jan.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/19/2019 7:33:00 AM
Thanks Line:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/15/2019 3:08:00 PM
Captivating imagery, Jan. Belated congratulations. Hugs // paul
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/17/2019 12:24:00 PM
thanks so much Paul:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/14/2019 2:03:00 PM
I like this poem very much Jan. Such good imagery. No need for the pic. Your poem describes it perfectly.
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Date: 2/14/2019 3:25:00 PM
thanks so much Charlie:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/3/2019 5:40:00 AM
this must have won great imaginary
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Date: 2/3/2019 5:45:00 AM
Thanks Stephen:-) hugs Jan x
Date: 2/1/2019 5:49:00 PM
Hello D.M. this is a lovely photo of the a moon setting into the water. Well it looks like it is setting into the water. Have a nice evening my friend.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/2/2019 5:31:00 AM
Thanks so much Darlene:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/1/2019 9:37:00 AM
A painter could paint a picture from your words only. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/2/2019 5:31:00 AM
Thanks so much Sunlite:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/1/2019 5:53:00 AM
Very picturesque!
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Date: 2/1/2019 7:04:00 PM
thanks Valerie:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/31/2019 3:26:00 PM
Another great Jan Allison work. Thanks for sharing them all, with all of us on the soup. oldbuck
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Date: 2/1/2019 3:03:00 AM
thanks so much OldBuck:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/30/2019 11:05:00 AM
This is beautiful, Jan I see that clear night. Congrats on your big win!
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Date: 2/1/2019 3:03:00 AM
thanks Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/28/2019 12:04:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing your talent. God bless you!
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Date: 2/1/2019 3:02:00 AM
thanks Beata:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/27/2019 8:03:00 PM
Beautiful write Jan..Congrats on your win..
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Date: 2/1/2019 3:02:00 AM
thanks Jospeh:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/27/2019 3:18:00 PM
I just knew this one would do well!Big congrats, Jan.
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Date: 2/1/2019 3:02:00 AM
thanks Andrea makes a change from my normal poop lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/27/2019 9:20:00 AM
Hi Jan, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/1/2019 3:01:00 AM
thanks Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/27/2019 8:53:00 AM
Jan, back to congratulate you on your 1st place win. Warmest Wishes~ Warren
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Date: 2/1/2019 3:01:00 AM
thanks warren:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/27/2019 8:21:00 AM
I too love a clear night, and I too love this poem, Jan. Great imagery and beautifully written! Congratulations on your 1st place win! Hugs // Charlie xx
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Date: 2/1/2019 3:01:00 AM
thanks for the contest prompt I have seldom written this form:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/26/2019 9:22:00 PM
Everything about this is wonderful, Jan! Beautiful imagery, lyrical lines, precise adherence to the form. Really, really, like it! :) gw
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Date: 2/1/2019 3:00:00 AM
thanks my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/25/2019 11:23:00 AM
Brilliant poem and beautiful photograph. Jan. Warmest wishes~ Warren
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Date: 2/1/2019 2:59:00 AM
thanks Warren:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/23/2019 4:03:00 AM
Hi Jan, this is such an excellent write. This one reads so well, such beautiful imagery your words display on your canvas. Such a dreamy light. I do so enjoy looking upon moon and your words brought the moon to my vision so easily Jan. This reads like a winner to me. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 2/1/2019 2:58:00 AM
thanks Mike:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/22/2019 5:06:00 PM
Excellent example of the form. Very descriptive. We have a hot tub on our deck and love a clear night for the moon and stars (and Bud Copper).....Well done. No luck needed here to place!..........A FAV for me....pat
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Date: 2/1/2019 2:57:00 AM
thanks Pat interesting new avatar lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/22/2019 8:52:00 AM
WoW! Jan, You did an excellent job with this form! I enjoy watching the moon on a lovely night and I enjoyed this poem. I think you've penned yourself into the winners circle. Well done:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/1/2019 2:57:00 AM
Thanks Alexis we often go for moonlight midnight walks:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/21/2019 5:44:00 PM
Hello Han, i love the clear sky, to see the stars and the full moon shine. Have a nice evening my friend.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/28/2019 8:26:00 AM
I love a clear moonlight night too:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/21/2019 5:08:00 PM
You did really well with this challenge, my friend. Your poem is so pretty.
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Date: 1/28/2019 8:25:00 AM
Thanks so much Andrea I loved the challenge:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/21/2019 11:55:00 AM
Well done! Too bad you weren't here last night to watch the Full Moon eclipse! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 1/21/2019 2:50:00 PM
I've seen pics on the web Rico I was tucked up in bed when the eclipse happened:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/21/2019 9:48:00 AM
Superb, I truly love this. FAV. that leaves me with naught of more import to say other than, WOW, Jan. Love and thoughts ... CayCay
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Date: 1/21/2019 9:57:00 AM
Thanks so much for the comment and fave:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/21/2019 9:05:00 AM
How splendidly you describe that awesome photo of the moon on the ocean, Jan. And the sea IS ever changing, ebbing and flowing through our lives. What can beat a clear night on the ocean or beach? The farther offshore you go, the more amazing are the images you describe so beautifully, Jan. Best wishes in the contest -- form looks perfect to me, but you left the contest name and sponsor off the bottom. Don't know if it's required. Sending winning wishes your way! Love, carolyn
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/21/2019 9:37:00 AM
Ooh thanks for the heads up I will put the contest details on, I really enjoyed the challenge, I love walking near the sea ion the promenade in the moonlight:-) hugs Jan xx
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