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Night Dawns

Night dawns

He sat
          The folding plastic chair creaked
           Fading  sunlight turned  bronze
He noticed
          The sun slide slowly towards the horizon 
          Drifting in the dark blue sky
          Flocks of Geese floating V’s waving goodbye
He shivered 
          A cloud momentarily blocking the sun 
         As  Orange and brown leaves fall silently to the ground 
He watched 
           Waves of blue and green sparkle a million ways 
           Tiny and warm,  lapping the shore
He felt 
           Smooth golden sand , warm and dry
           Gleam white ,Under the feet 
             The wind tug gently as it passes by
He wrote
           As swimsuits , bikinis and bare feet strolled merrily by
          And  Colored umbrellas reflected the sky
          While Swallows soar and dive 
He heard 
           The sun hiss into waters clean and clear
           Butterflies dance in the sky 
           Darkness land softly on tiptoes and feet
           Daylight sleep and night fall
He sat
            As the stars twinkle on a bed of black velvet lace
            And slept , peaceful and deep
           While the cycle renewed

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Date: 7/31/2018 9:20:00 PM
This poem is a pure delight for all of the senses! Very nicely penned Jim!
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Jim Joyce
Date: 12/15/2020 9:52:00 AM
ty lovely
Date: 10/28/2014 6:41:00 AM
Very descriptive and expressive work..I enjoyed reading this one today..It was captivating..Sara
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Jim Joyce
Date: 12/15/2020 9:50:00 AM
ty so much
Date: 10/27/2014 2:59:00 PM
I really enjoyed reading your poem Jim. It was so peaceful.
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Jim Joyce
Date: 12/15/2020 9:51:00 AM
appreciated greatly

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