John Lawless Poet Limerick

Night Crawlers

Night Crawlers

As the bartender shouted last call
they clung to the bar lest they fall
then said “let’s continue”
“what’s next on the venue”
let go and completed the crawl.


John G. Lawless
10/12/2016

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Eve Roper October 13, 2016 at 9:37 PM Very good , John, good luck in the contest Hugs

Janice Canerdy October 13, 2016 at 4:51 PM A 7 for your well-written limerick, John! Janice John Lawless October 13, 2016 at 9:13 PM Yeah, Janice, but those Boston Pub Crawls....well....they seemed like a good idea at the time....