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Night Crawlers

Night Crawlers

As the bartender shouted last call
they clung to the bar lest they fall
then said “let’s continue”
“what’s next on the venue”
let go and completed the crawl.


John G. Lawless
10/12/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/13/2016 9:37:00 PM
Very good , John, good luck in the contest Hugs
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Date: 10/13/2016 4:51:00 PM
A 7 for your well-written limerick, John! Janice
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John Lawless
Date: 10/13/2016 9:13:00 PM
Yeah, Janice, but those Boston Pub Crawls....well....they seemed like a good idea at the time....

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