Night Confession

Covered with fake smiles 
Intention of hidden trap
Pulled off mask of eyes
Infatuation vanished
Devotion freezed as ice













July 11, 2018
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Boddie Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 3:33 PM
the deceptive approach....the illusion of a coach....someone to ease your burden....through efforts that remain uncertain....because most only want your flesh....making you a victim, just like the rest....such a profound write my dear friend....;)
Negron Flores Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 9:43 PM
Thank you Eric for your wonderful feedback.
Turner Avatar
July 11, 2018 at 9:57 PM
That will certainly do it! Nobody likes fake. Nice tanka, Nayda:)
Negron Flores Avatar
July 11, 2018 at 10:56 PM
Thank you Daniel.
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