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Night Confession

Covered with fake smiles Intention of hidden trap Pulled off mask of eyes Infatuation vanished Devotion freezed as ice July 11, 2018

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Date: 7/28/2018 3:33:00 PM
the deceptive approach....the illusion of a coach....someone to ease your burden....through efforts that remain uncertain....because most only want your flesh....making you a victim, just like the rest....such a profound write my dear friend....;)
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 7/30/2018 9:43:00 PM
Thank you Eric for your wonderful feedback.
Date: 7/11/2018 9:57:00 PM
That will certainly do it! Nobody likes fake. Nice tanka, Nayda:)
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 7/11/2018 10:56:00 PM
Thank you Daniel.

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