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Night Blanket

There's a lot less talking away from city lights a lot more quiet under starry nights A lot less chaos when you take time out more to breath in relax all the doubt A lot less congestion in the open country air more to appreciate the city don't compare A lot less noise from all the open bars just toasting marshmallows underneath the stars I wouldn't change a thing the city's not for me underneath the blanket of stars I'd rather be.

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Date: 10/9/2023 11:29:00 AM
Paula ….a truly lovely peaceful poem and l understand and can relate to completely….Denmark is such a beautiful place! Debx
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Date: 10/9/2023 7:05:00 AM
Paula you so speak my heart. I live in Carolina and will always be a country girl. This is beautiful and expresses a love of nature's gems as well as a preference for it verses city life!
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Date: 10/29/2023 1:47:00 AM
Yes, it is a better way of life, glad the poem resonated with you, thank you for your kind words.
Date: 10/9/2023 4:06:00 AM
Underneath the blanket of stars- ahh, that's so enchanting and magical! Yes, the air has more freshness and rejuvenating vibe if we actually take a moment to inhale in present, away from the chaos.. A very beautiful and deep write, loved reading this!
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Date: 10/29/2023 1:46:00 AM
Thank you so kindly. :)

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