Night Beats Swinging--Ty

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Ringing flinging swinging winging Ringing beats , hips flinging thrill me… whole Dance; swinging, winging as night- grooves roll ! ------------ 8/10/2019 For charles messina: Your Turn For A Tyburn

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Kurt Ravidas

Date: 8/15/2019 10:42:00 AM

Oh, it must be perfect, I'd say, flawless tyburn. Frankly speaking, I'm not a prominent expert in tyburns, but it really looks flawless. And pleasant to ear either. Good luck in the contest)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/12/2019 3:36:00 PM

EXCELLENT, and great rhymes, sweetie. Thanks for my placement in your contest.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/11/2019 1:44:00 PM

Such a well-penned pleasure of a tyburn, nette! (Soup mail, please). ~ Gershon

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/11/2019 3:41:00 AM

Party time, I'm in.

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/10/2019 6:26:00 PM

I agree, a very fun poem. Nice to read tonight. I enjoyed this. Excellent :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/10/2019 5:36:00 PM

Fun!

Eve Roper

Date: 8/10/2019 3:53:00 PM

Fantastic, Nette, good luck in the contest.... Hugs

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/10/2019 3:29:00 PM

Hi Nette, I enjoyed this upbeat and fun write. I love to dance ( tell that to my feet lol!) I wish you the best of luck in the contest . Have a wonderful weekend:-) Alexis