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"night Away"

Light shines through the morning window... Through your long dark hair my desire grows.. Barely dressed as we pack our bags... A night or two away and far from life's snags... A dinner for us is a candlelit escape... For five star room we must close the drapes... Lay and watch the city steal the moon... For we groove to sounds of our sensual tunes...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/23/2010 12:43:00 AM
sounds really nice, Michael! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/22/2010 7:47:00 AM
awesome work here, love it. Harry
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Date: 7/21/2010 3:09:00 PM
Well I do like this one .. and I so agree with that last line.. and enjoy my friend.. please put a 't' after close the drapes.. as u will need to do that later.luv.. enjoyed your sexy lines today my White Knight.. nothing like vacation time to get the passion juices stirring.. with luv...
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Date: 7/21/2010 12:11:00 PM
naughty and nice!!
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Date: 7/21/2010 11:35:00 AM
I enjoyed this write Michael, ffct Wilma
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Date: 7/21/2010 8:07:00 AM
A nice write. enjoyed it
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