"night Away"

Light shines through the morning window...
Through your long dark hair my desire grows..
Barely dressed as we pack our bags...
A night or two away and far from life's snags...
A dinner for us is a candlelit escape...
For five star room we must close the drapes...
Lay and watch the city steal the moon...
For we groove to sounds of our sensual tunes...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
July 23, 2010 at 12:43 AM
sounds really nice, Michael! Luv, Andrea
Horsman Avatar
July 22, 2010 at 7:47 AM
awesome work here, love it. Harry
Sweetheart Avatar
July 21, 2010 at 3:09 PM
Well I do like this one .. and I so agree with that last line.. and enjoy my friend.. please put a 't' after close the drapes.. as u will need to do that later.luv.. enjoyed your sexy lines today my White Knight.. nothing like vacation time to get the passion juices stirring.. with luv...
Culverhouse Avatar
July 21, 2010 at 12:11 PM
naughty and nice!!
Neels Avatar
July 21, 2010 at 11:35 AM
I enjoyed this write Michael, ffct Wilma
Mehta Avatar
July 21, 2010 at 8:07 AM
A nice write. enjoyed it
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