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Night Angel

In deep slumber madness, she comforts me
Appearing, unencumbered, from the mist
Subconscious suspension our nightly tryst
Erasing my mind of bad memories
She mends and warms my soul so tenderly
Imbibing my thoughts and heart with her kiss
Lovingly fulfills a long ago wish
Thankfully restoring my sanity
Regularly she visits in silence
Enlightening my dreams with wholesomeness
Wiping my tears of angered betrayal
Exchanging her love for malevolence
I awaken with renewed happiness
Refreshed from the angelic portrayal




   an original poem by the "poemdog" Daniel Turner
Italian Sonnet rhyme scheme abba  abba  cde  cde
  14 lines  10 syllables per  140 syllables  80 words

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/22/2016 5:42:00 AM
I always enjoy reading a beautiful sonnet, Daniel. Excellent write, a worthy 7. T.J
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/22/2016 6:49:00 AM
Thank you, TJ. Coming from you that's very high praise, considering your one of the best sonnet writers on the soup. Peace my friend:)
Date: 2/19/2016 7:21:00 AM
Daniel, this is such a beautiful romantic Italian Sonnet! It sings from the heart and soul of the lover in praise of the wonder of the beloved one. Thank you for mystically transporting me to another place and time through the power of your magical pen! A-7 and blessings always. Pandita
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 2/19/2016 9:21:00 AM
Aaah! Thank you for your sweet compliments!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/19/2016 8:45:00 AM
Very flattering comments, indeed. I thank you for taking time from your day to read and leave such supportive and encouraging remarks. I always appreciate looking at your beautiful photo. Such a winning smile and perfect name. Peace and God Bless:)
Date: 2/18/2016 12:52:00 PM
Fabulous piece my friend. It flows well...I don't think it skipped a beat
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/18/2016 12:56:00 PM
Sorry about that, Tim. I was sending a reply to Luloo and this machine send you my response. Same goes to you without all of the mushy talk. You know, manly thanks. LOL
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/18/2016 12:54:00 PM
Thank you my dear. You have always been supportive and encouraging and I will always treasure your compliments. I do so appreciate your time as I know how valuable time is. Thank you with all of my heart. Peace dear one:)
Date: 2/18/2016 12:49:00 PM
Daniel, definitely a 7 on this gem..I always love the flow you carry, beautiful and meaningful, passionate and sensual.Great job -luloo *smiles*
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/18/2016 12:55:00 PM
Thank you my dear. You have always been supportive and encouraging and I will always treasure your compliments. I do so appreciate your time as I know how valuable time is. Thank you with all of my heart. Peace dear one:)
Date: 2/18/2016 10:26:00 AM
Very beautiful..really love this one ' reminds me of another poem I wrote..angels in the mist ..it's about a dream angel that comforts one in they sleep..
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/18/2016 12:52:00 PM
Thank you, Venita for your kind words. I will be reading your poem. Peace my friend:)
Date: 2/18/2016 9:00:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful piece, Daniel - filled with immense imagery and passion!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/18/2016 9:56:00 AM
Thank you so much. I've really been trying hard to learn to write these sonnets. They can be very aggravating at times. It means a lot to me that you spent your time reading and commenting. It is not only encouraging but very supportive. Peace and God Bless:)