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Night Angel

In deep slumber madness, she comforts me Appearing, unencumbered, from the mist Subconscious suspension our nightly tryst Erasing my mind of bad memories She mends and warms my soul so tenderly Imbibing my thoughts and heart with her kiss Lovingly fulfills a long ago wish Thankfully restoring my sanity Regularly she visits in silence Enlightening my dreams with wholesomeness Wiping my tears of angered betrayal Exchanging her love for malevolence I awaken with renewed happiness Refreshed from the angelic portrayal an original poem by the "poemdog" Daniel Turner Italian Sonnet rhyme scheme abba abba cde cde 14 lines 10 syllables per 140 syllables 80 words

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 2/19/2016 7:21:00 AM

Daniel, this is such a beautiful romantic Italian Sonnet! It sings from the heart and soul of the lover in praise of the wonder of the beloved one. Thank you for mystically transporting me to another place and time through the power of your magical pen! A-7 and blessings always. Pandita

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/19/2016 9:21:00 AM

Aaah! Thank you for your sweet compliments!

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/19/2016 8:45:00 AM

Very flattering comments, indeed. I thank you for taking time from your day to read and leave such supportive and encouraging remarks. I always appreciate looking at your beautiful photo. Such a winning smile and perfect name. Peace and God Bless:)

Tim Smith

Date: 2/18/2016 12:52:00 PM

Fabulous piece my friend. It flows well...I don't think it skipped a beat

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/18/2016 12:56:00 PM

Sorry about that, Tim. I was sending a reply to Luloo and this machine send you my response. Same goes to you without all of the mushy talk. You know, manly thanks. LOL

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/18/2016 12:54:00 PM

Thank you my dear. You have always been supportive and encouraging and I will always treasure your compliments. I do so appreciate your time as I know how valuable time is. Thank you with all of my heart. Peace dear one:)

Lu Loo

Date: 2/18/2016 12:49:00 PM

Daniel, definitely a 7 on this gem..I always love the flow you carry, beautiful and meaningful, passionate and sensual.Great job -luloo *smiles*

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/18/2016 12:55:00 PM

Venita Schindler

Date: 2/18/2016 10:26:00 AM

Very beautiful..really love this one ' reminds me of another poem I wrote..angels in the mist ..it's about a dream angel that comforts one in they sleep..

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/18/2016 12:52:00 PM

Thank you, Venita for your kind words. I will be reading your poem. Peace my friend:)

Michael Whatley

Date: 2/18/2016 9:00:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful piece, Daniel - filled with immense imagery and passion!

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/18/2016 9:56:00 AM

Thank you so much. I've really been trying hard to learn to write these sonnets. They can be very aggravating at times. It means a lot to me that you spent your time reading and commenting. It is not only encouraging but very supportive. Peace and God Bless:)