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Night and Fear

The rain was whispering Like my grandmother When I was little bay Saying hey "Futu Weak up " Then but all in silent right I was one though in sight . Dan! Dan! I heard a sound Then I went out but nothing found , I think there may someone at ground I called hey Mom! Weak up! Weak up! Night was so deep but so no light Then I got in Mom room Where I was a clear bed I found So scared me ! I tried to call my brothers And sisters who were sleeping low floor. But I couldn't, I was tied with my mouth sound, I called hardly But couldn't make a sound . Tun Lin Soe ( Soul of Rohang)

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Date: 9/9/2017 7:03:00 PM
Good write , but you can still do better with time.keep writing pal...
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Date: 9/9/2017 7:02:00 PM
Good write , but you can still do better with time.keep writing pal...
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