Night and Fear

The rain was whispering 
Like my grandmother 
When I was little bay 
Saying hey "Futu Weak up "
Then but all in silent right
I was one though in sight .

Dan! Dan! I heard a sound 
Then I went out but nothing found , 
I think there may someone at ground 
I called hey Mom! Weak up! Weak up!  
Night was so deep but so no light 
Then I got in Mom room 
Where I was a clear bed I found 
So scared me ! I tried to call my brothers
And sisters who were sleeping low floor. 
But I couldn't,  I was tied
 with my mouth sound, I called hardly 
But couldn't make a sound . 

Tun Lin Soe  ( Soul of Rohang)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Arowolo Avatar
September 9, 2017 at 7:03 PM
Good write , but you can still do better with time.keep writing pal...
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September 9, 2017 at 7:02 PM
Good write , but you can still do better with time.keep writing pal...
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