Night

Wind calls and whispers Crickets chirp under the moon Dreams float up to sky

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Beata Agustin

Date: 5/10/2024 6:33:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Skat A

Date: 6/8/2016 1:18:00 AM

Fiona, hope to see a new one from you...skat----

Skat A

Date: 5/12/2016 11:04:00 AM

I do like this haiku...SKAT--

Barry Stebbings

Date: 5/11/2016 1:01:00 PM

Good Haiku, Fiona. I like 'Dreams float up to sky'

Fiona Kaldeway
Date: 5/16/2016 9:44:00 AM

So did I, that's why I wrote it :)